RE: [wsdm] Groups - wd-wsdm-muws-part1-1.0-20041127.doc uploaded

["Springer, Ian P." <ian.springer@hp.com>]

<snip> [One such element of metadata on properties] should be [One such
metadata on properties]

But that doesn't sound right. I've never seen the word metadata used in
such a way. If you want to avoid using the word element, try replacing
it with "piece" or "item" or some other such word.

Ian 

| -----Original Message-----
| From: Sedukhin, Igor S [mailto:Igor.Sedukhin@ca.com] 
| Sent: Tuesday, November 30, 2004 12:41 AM
| To: Vambenepe, William N; wsdm@lists.oasis-open.org
| Subject: RE: [wsdm] Groups - 
| wd-wsdm-muws-part1-1.0-20041127.doc uploaded
| 
| My comments on the subj:
| 
| 121-122: [portType element information item] it is either 
| element or EII
| but across the document. Pick one. I suggest the "element". 
| The document
| jumps from one to the other and that is not appropriate.
| 
| 255 shold better say [choice of an implementation approach]
| 
| 288 [resource-specific] was just fine over there, I believe. I do not
| understand why is this wording bifurcation happening in that 
| sentence...
| 
| 301 [allows for a range of coverage]... [gradual coverage]... Just say
| [covers equally well starting from the low-end manageability up to the
| high-end manageability]...
| 
| 309 should be [This flexibility]
| 
| 361 [One such element of metadata on properties] should be [One such
| metadata on properties] and similarily [Capability is an element of
| metadata that] should be [Capability is metadata that]. This use of
| "element" is confusing here with its meaning of an XML element
| throughout the document.
| 
| 420 [permitting virtually free-form expression of events.] 
| This is very
| fancy. It is not really free form, is it? There is a form 
| given here and
| unless it conforms to it it ain't a WSDM event. So I suggest that this
| statement is removed. One may simply state [WSDM event format is
| extensible.] Which is already stated somewhat in the sentense above
| this.
| 
| 421 I do not believe that Figute 6 is at all necessaary. We have only
| used UML to represent individual capabilities so far. Never any data
| models. It is not consistent to represent some data and not 
| the other. I
| suggest that we keep using UML for only the capability models
| (properties, operations, events.
| 
| 516 [The manageability capability URI for the Identity capability is]
| why not just say [This capability is identified by the following URI]
| 
| 538-540 That stuff just hangs out there without any obvious attahment.
| Why not precede this with [This property has the following metadata:]
| and indent the lines.
| 
| 592 [characteristics of a manageability interface rather than the
| resource.] I think not. I think [characteristics of a manageability
| endpoint implementation rather than the resource.]
| 
| Schema: 
| 
| I suggest that we do <xs:group instead of <xs:complexType. I do not
| understand how [CorrelatablePropertiesPropertiesType] is useable by
| anybody else. I don't know why is it there if it is not useable.
| 
| 
| -- Igor Sedukhin .. (igor.sedukhin@ca.com)
| -- (631) 342-4325 .. 1 CA Plaza, Islandia, NY 11749 
| 
| 
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