RE: [wsdm] Groups - Primer with Heather's updates forMetadataand Extending capabilities (wd-wsdm

["Mark Peel" <mpeel@novell.com>]

  If you *really* want to be nitpicky, no, we should not.  The primer
itself can't do anything except scatter all over the floor if you drop
it.  Reading it performs the task of preparing the reader (at least, we
hope it will!).  But if the consensus wants to remove "Reading" from the
sentence and leave it understood, I don't object.

Cheers,
MLP

>>> "Vaughn Bullard" <vbullard@amberpoint.com> 9/7/2005 12:07:23 pm
>>>
Nitpicking again.  Should we not say "This primer should prepare the
reader
to understand....."  .  

 

-----Original Message-----
From: Mark Peel [mailto:mpeel@novell.com] 
Sent: Wednesday, September 07, 2005 12:49 PM
To: Kirk Wilson; wsdm@lists.oasis-open.org 
Subject: RE: [wsdm] Groups - Primer with Heather's updates for
Metadataand
Extending capabilities (wd-wsdm


  We might begin to address Kirk's point by recasting the first
sentence of
the introduction:

"Reading this primer should prepare the reader to understand the
specifications that make up the WSDM standard (Management of Web
Services
and Management Using Web Services; abbreviated MOWS and MUWS) and also
some
of that standard's supporting specifications (e.g.,
WS-ResourceProperties
and WS-BaseNotification)."

Cheers,


Mark Peel
Web Services Infrastructure
Novell, Inc.

>>> "Wilson, Kirk D" <Kirk.Wilson@ca.com> 9/7/2005 9:39:00 am >>>
Heather, Bryan,

Question on some changes in section 1.  I noticed in this version, a
number
of occurrences of "WSDM" in the Primer Introduction were changed to the
more
technically correct "MUWS" or "MOWS".  However, for the reader, the
distinction between MUWS and MOWS is not introduced until section
1.2.4.2.
Doesn't the change assume that the reader is already going to be
familiar
with the organization of the specification before reading the
introduction?



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