Comments on MUWS 1.1 Part 2

[Heather Kreger <kreger@us.ibm.com>]

Hi, 
I had the following comments on MUWS
Part 2 1.1.  

I didn't find the new WEF internationalization
elements... did they make it into the Feb 16th draft?

Broken Refs: 71, 72, 1154, 1284
Syntax (extra periods, and other nuisanses)

199,  change to 'This MUWS  specification
also does not ... manageable resource, stored, or made available'. 
206: change to 'These elements are Capability
and Validwhile.'. 
1047,  change to 'may have properties,
operations, and '
 1064, 1078,  1326,  1329,
 ..
1441 'insection' change to 'in section'

Technical clarifications/questions
118 - Are the namespaces right?
136 - Is WS-Addressing using Ref parameters
in this way still?
163 - Since WSRF doesn't require GetResourceProperty...
should we?  Should we require GetResourceProperty OR QueryResourceProperty????
203 - We should indicate here that WSRF
is working on WSRMD and we will probably use this in a future release.
(like lines 256-260)
435 - Message Catalog section is missing
from example and section
674 - Missing metadata for State property
(mutable, not modifiable, etc. )
905 - Clarify that a counter increases
based on some resource situation, not just every time you get the counter.
So.. it doesn't really always increase by when its collected. 
995, 1024 - Add statement that these
events are property change events (as documented in previous section)
1265, 1314 - MUWSE namespace prefix
- is that right? or should it be muws2? 
1568 - don't bold Tony Gullato's name
1584 - fix the copyright to add 2006
1492 - references section needs to be
updated to point ot Committee draft of specs.. also in non normative section

We'll go over all these comments on
Thursday
Heather Kreger
STSM, Web Services Lead Architect for SWG Emerging Technologies
Author of "Java and JMX: Building Manageable Systems"
kreger@us.ibm.com
919-543-3211 (t/l 441)  cell:919-496-9572