RE: [wsdm] Comment on MUWS part 1 and 2

["Vaughn Bullard" <vbullard@amberpoint.com>]

Mitsunori-san,

No problem.  I've made the changes for MUWS part 1 and 2.  I will post these
up to the website within one hour.

Thank you again,
Vaughn Bullard
 

-----Original Message-----
From: Mitsunori Satomi [mailto:Mitsunori.Satomi@hds.com] 
Sent: Tuesday, February 21, 2006 9:53 PM
To: wsdm@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [wsdm] Comment on MUWS part 1 and 2

Hi,

I found some typos and comment in the spec documents.

1. MUWS Part1 (KDW wsdm-muws-part1-1[1][1][1].0-vjb-tws-me.doc)
 - P5L134 "a group of properties-operations," should be "a group of
properties, operations,"

2. MUWS Part2 (KDW wsdm-muws-part2-1[1][1].0-vjb-changesaccepted.doc)
 - P29L1135 "/muws1:ResourceID" should be "/muws1:ResourceId".

3. MUWS Primer (wd-wsdm-primer-muws-wd_final.doc)
 - P40L1896 This table shows "LastUpdated" attribute is "REQUIRED" if
TimeScope="Interval" or "PointInTime".
                   But MUWS spec Part2 does not describe anything about this
attribute is required or not.
                   So IMHO, I suggest that we should change these two
columns from "REQUIRED"(checked mark) to "recommended".

And my colleagues in Japan are worried about the consistency between Primer
documents and other related specs (WSRF, WSN and WS-Addressing).
For example, at the MOWS Primer document P13L566, this sample XML text use
<wsnt:Filter> tag, but I think that WSN Jun. 2004 version spec doesn't have
such XML tag.
(<wsnt:Filter> is a tag of new version of WSN).

IMHO after WSDM 1.1 is adopted, we should update the both Primer documents
which have consistency with the related specifications, or we should
synchronize the Primer and MUWS / MOWS spec. in the next version (WSDM
2.0?).
 
I am so sorry for sending our comments later.
----
Mitsunori SATOMI (mailto:Mitsunori.Satomi@hds.com)
  Director, Advanced Software Architect, SD-US
    Hitachi Data Systems Corporation
      Office: +1-408-970-4385 / Fax: +1-408-327-3351


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