Re: [wsrm] Groups - WS-Reliability-2004-01-06.pdf uploaded

[Sunil Kunisetty <Sunil.Kunisetty@oracle.com>]

 Hi Iwasa,

 Here are some quick technical and editorial comments on v 0.85. I'll have more detailed
 and thorough comments before the F2F.


  Technical

 - Section 3 (Message Format).
   - replyTo is not an element rather an attribute of ReplyPattern (pgs. 15 & 16)
   - For PollRequest, GroupId is a required element (minOccurs = 1) (pg. 16)

 - Section 3.1/Table1 (pg. 17)
    - Timestamp should be removed from the child elements. It was removed when
      TTL was renamed to ExpiryTime
    - Many more Faults to be added

 - Section 3.1.1/Table 2 (pg. 18)
   - Add InvalidGroupParameter fault to the table (also change INVALID_GROUP_PARAMETER
     to InvalidGroupParameter on line 555)

 - Section 3.3.1/Pg. 24
    - GroupId under PollRequest is different from GroupId in MessageHeader in 2 ways.
      i) It has zero or more SequenceNumberRange elements
      ii) It also has an attribute called 'value'. it's type is the same as the type of GroupId in MessageHeader
      (because of REL-94)

  - Section 3.3.1.1/SequenceNumberRange
    - It has 2 attributes called 'from' and 'to', both of type unsignedLong (pg. 24-25)
      (because of REL-94)

  - Section 3.4/ResponseElement (pg. 25).
    - Response Element has only one child element called RefToGroupId.
    - RefToGroupId has an attribute called 'value' of type MIDType and can have zero or more
      RefToSequenceNumber elements.

  - Section 3.3.1/Table 14  (RefToGroupId/pg. 26)
    - Should have a new attribute called 'value'

 - Section 3.3.1.1/Table 15  (RefToSequenceNumber/pg. 26)
    - Should have 2 new attributes called 'from' and 'to'.

 Editorial:

 - The Termination conditions (in pg. 11) uses GroupExpiryTime and GroupMaxIdleDuration.
   It should be consistent with the actual attribute names (starting with lower cases).

 - When attributes are mentioned in the Table, please list their types. Ex. status (string)

 - ReplyTo attribute (in Section 3.1.4/pg. 21) should be replyTo (all attributes start with lower
   case).

 - Please add the schema as an appendix

 - Section 2.4/Line no. 259.
   It should read "after the message has been processed and delivered to the "next processing layer".

 - Figures 1-2-3 on pgs. 8-9 may need to be updated to show the "next processor entity" as per our
   new definitions.

 - All the new terms such as Group Termination, Removal, Complete etc... should be defined
   in the terminology section


 Thanks,
 -Sunil



kiwasa@jp.fujitsu.com wrote:

> The document revision WS-Reliability-2004-01-06.pdf has been submitted by Kazunori Iwasa (kiwasa@jp.fujitsu.com) to the OASIS Web Services Reliable Messaging TC document repository.
> This document is revision #14 of WS-Reliability-2003-09-05b.pdf.
>
> Document Description:
> January6,2004(WD0.85):
> Section2.4, Section2.5, and Section
> 3.1.1 are updated to incorporate
> resolutions for Rel-52, Rel-57, and Rel-
> 82.
> --
>
> WD0.84:This was updated for:
> Rel-33:Section 1.8: Update on Message Delivery and Acknowledgment Message,
> Rel-50:Section 3.1.3 ExpiryTime, and
> Editorial updates
> --
>
> WD0.83:This was updated for:
> Section2.6: Added description of Figure3
> Section3: Added tables for each element
> Rel-31: Section2.5
> Rel-38: Timestamp was removed from Section 3
> Rel-100: Added Section2.9 Attachments
> Rel-32: Added definitions to Section1.8
> Rel-94: Figure5 and Section 3.3
> (Needs additional descriptions and examples in Section3.3)
> Editorial updates, especially for :
> http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/wsrm/200310/msg00054.html
> All editorial comments above are updated except one, which is a comment for line 357, to keep consistency with other sections.
> --
>
> WD0.70:This was updated for
> Section 2 : Messaging Models
> Section 3 : Message Format,and others
> Section 5 : HTTP Binding
> Editorial updates
> --
>
> WD0.54:This was updated for
> Issue Rel-38 : Section 3.1.3 Timestamp
> Issue Rel-98 : Section 3.1.2 and 3.2.3
> Issue Rel-40 : Section 3.1.4
> Issue Rel-88 : Section 3.1.1
> Issue Rel-16 : Section 3.2.1 to 3.2.3
> Issue Rel-14 : Appendix C
> Editorial update
> --
> WD0.52:This was updated with resolution from Prelim minutes for 4/Sep/2003 at:
> http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsrm/email/archives/200309/msg00010.html
>
> I believe all resolved issues are updated in this WD.
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