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Subject: Comments on WS-Reliability-2004-01-15.pdf (0.87)
I realise that some of these may be made out of date by the version of the spec that has just been posted. Regards, Tony Graham ------------------------------------------------------------------------ XML Technology Center - Dublin Phone: +353 1 8199708 Sun Microsystems x(70)19708 Hamilton House, East Point Business Park, Dublin 3, Ireland Line Comment 263-294 These sections should be moved to after Section 4, SOAP Fault, because they use many terms that have not been introduced yet. This section uses the terms "start", "end", "ExpiryTime", "max(ExpiryTime)", "GroupId value", "SequenceNumber intervals", "groupExpriryTime", "groupMaxIdleDuration", "InvalidGroupParameter fault", "status=start", and 'status="end"'. (Note also the absence of quotes around "start" and their presence around "end".) 269 Should "Group Termination and State Removal Criteria" be a section title? 542, 721 The text does not indicate that PollRequest can appear more than once in a SOAP Header. 554 The meaning of "Cardinality" isn't obvious (and the word isn't in the Concise Oxford Dictionary), especially since elements such as MessageOrder that can appear zero or one times are shown as having the same cardinality as elements such as PollRequest that can appear zero or more times. 732 The text does not indicate that GroupId (or MessageId) can appear more than once in a PollRequest element. 748 While a PollRequest can request acknowledgment of a messages with a range of sequence number values, it is not clear what happens when one or more of the messages in that range caused faults. Consider, for example, a sequence of messages with the same GroupId and sequence numbers 0 to 4 sent using the Poll reply pattern. If message 1 fails with an InvalidMessageHeader fault and message 3 fails with an InvalidRequest fault, what is the expected response for a PollRequest element containing <SequenceNumberRange from="0" to="4"/>? 754 What is the expected correspondence between the value of the SequenceNumberRange (or SequenceNumRange) element and the value of its 'from' and 'to' attributes? The schema indicates that this is an empty element. 762 "Response Element" should have the style of a section title. 790-795 This paragraph should look like a paragraph. 796 Same comment as for line 754. 807 The Fault element does not have the same sort of table as the other element definitions.
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