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Subject: RE: [wsrm] editorial comments on V0.991 with "history"


Title: RE: [wsrm] editorial comments on V0.991 with "history"

Sorry, some bytes were lost on the way ;)
Here it is:


-----Original Message-----
From: Tom Rutt [mailto:tom@coastin.com]
Sent: Monday, March 08, 2004 11:57 AM
To: WSRM (E-mail)
Subject: Re: [wsrm] editorial comments on V0.991 with "history"




Jacques Durand wrote:

> Editorial comments on V0.991, attached.
>
Jacques Comment on Line 89 asks to replace text, but does not give the proposed replacement text.


<JD>
L89: replace :
"should reliability also include synchronization between sender and
receiver applications"
with:
"How much of the synchronization between sender and
receiver applications can and should be supported"
(because we already address this partially, with the Ack on delivery)
</JD>


Jacques Comment on Line 220 does not provide exact text to add for examples 2, 3 and 4.

<JD>
L220: Just after Example 1, a few lines should give a first general understanding:
"The message above uses the Request reliability element, which specifies among other things,
that all three features should be used: Guaranteed delivery ("AckRequested" element),
No Duplicate Delivery ("DuplicateElimination" element) and Ordered Delivery ("MessageOrder"
element)."
Example 2:
"The message above uses the PollRequest reliability element, which is polling the receiver for the status of messages within the range of sequence numbers 0 to 20 of a particular group. The expected response will tell which of these messages have been delivered (Acknowledged)."

Example 3:
"The message above uses the Response reliability element, which in this case is carrying the
response of a previous PollRequest element. The response acknowledges messages for a particular group within the ranges of sequence numbers 0 to 14 and 16 to 20 (meaning that 15 has not been delivered yet, possibly because it was not received.)"

Example 4:
"The message above uses the Response reliability element, which in this case is carrying the
response of a previous PollRequest element. The response is reporting a reliability Fault for message with sequence number 15 within a particular group."

</JD>


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I also add two of my own Editorial comments:

Lines 637 and 654 -  the key boxes use the words mandatory and
optional.  This needs to be changed to cardinality 0 or 1 and
cardinality 1.

Line 871 : change "Response and Poll" to "Response or Poll"

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