Re: [wsrm] Nest revision

[Doug Bunting <Doug.Bunting@Sun.COM>]

Bob,

Slides 3 to 6:

Prefix the word "Background:" to the titles or otherwise introduce this group

Slide 3:

The proprietary solution should follow the Open Standards one.  They both 
should have a date. (WS-R specification first published 9 Jan 2003, OASIS 
TC publicly announced on 26 Feb 2003; WS-RM specification first published 
13 Mar 2003.)

Slide 4:

s/protected/protect/

Slides 7 to 9:

Prefix the word "Comparison:" to the titles or otherwise introduce this 
group (clearly separate it from the preceding, shared information)

Slide 7:

Minor: looks like this slide is missing a bullet for one item (starting 
"WS-RM does not support") near the bottom

recommend rewording "behind a firewall" to "separated by a firewall"

Slide 10:

Second bullet: "IBM was invited" should say "IBM, like the other authors of
WS-RM, was invited"

Slide 11:

First sub-bullet of last bullet: Should say "WS-R Spec has been edited"? (!)

Slide 13:

Minor: change "or action upon message" to "or other message handling"

Slide 17:

First bullet: "enough to be complete" should be "enough to be clear and 
complete"

Slide 21:

Second bullet: Not sure we need this point, which should be obvious from 
our TC charter and the response itself.

Last bullet: Does wsrm-comment@lists.oasis-open.org list still work?  If 
not, refer everyone to the TC comments page[1]

thanx,
	doug

[1] http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/comments/form.php?wg_abbrev=wsrm

On 06-May-04 04:41, Bob Freund wrote:
> Heartfelt comments by Noon Pacific please.
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> Decision on next call will be made then
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> Thanks
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> -bob
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