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Subject: Full agenda for wsrm tc teleconf 6/8/04
The full agenda with links is attached. We have two potential votes scheduled for today's meeting. Tom Rutt WSRM TC Chair -- ---------------------------------------------------- Tom Rutt email: tom@coastin.com; trutt@us.fujitsu.com Tel: +1 732 801 5744 Fax: +1 732 774 5133Title: Draft Agenda to WSRM TC Conference Call – May 06, 2003
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Full Agenda of WSRM TC Conference Call – The meeting of the WSRM TC will take place by teleconference
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Draft
Agenda:
Draft Agenda to WSRM TC Conference Call 1 Roll Call 2 Minutes Discussion 2.1 Appointment of Minute Taker 2.2 Approval of previous meeting minutes – 3 Action Item Status Review 4 Discussions of unresolved editorial comments 5 Discussion of Document progression 6 Scheduled Vote for CD 7 Scheduled Vote to Submit to OASIS for member vote 6 Discussion of FAQ for WS-Reliability 2
Roll
Call
Attendance: Meeting ?? quorate. 3
Minutes
Discussion
3.1 Appointment of Minute TakerTom Rutt will take minutes. Minutes will serve to record issue resolutions. 3.2 Approval of previous meeting minutesThe minutes of the June 01 teleconf are posted at: http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsrm/download.php/7101/MinutesWSRMTC060104.htm 4 Status of Action Items · Action Item
status as of 6/3/04 5
Discussion
of Issues and editorial Comments
The following issues list includes one open item which need further discussion: · · Updated
public comments issues list posted 5.1 Namespace for Schema, and location· Re: [wsrm]
Action Item status as of 6/3/04 · Groups -
ws-reliability-1.1.xsd uploaded · Groups -
reference-1.1.xsd uploaded · Groups -
fnp-1.1.xsd uploaded · Groups -
wsrmfp-1.1.xsd uploaded Tom: changes applied to 1.01F, all filenames have 1.1 in their name. 5.2 Editorial comments on Draft 1.015.2.1 Tom Rutt Comments· Detailed
Editorial Fixes for Sections 1 - 4 of ED 1.01 · Editorial
changes for Sections 5 onward to Draft 1.01 Tom: All changes applied to editing drafts 1.01E and 1.01F 5.2.2 Jacques Durand Comments· Re: [wsrm]
editorial comments on 101 Changes applies to Editing draft 1.01F 5.2.3 Mark Peel CommentsEmail from Mark Peel: Some
proofreading corrections: the line numbers are from the 06-04 document. I didn't
have time to proof the whole document.
If you don't feel these are appropriate, I don't mind if you omit them. Mark
Peel Web
Services Infrastructure Novell,
Inc. 134: Erroneous capitalization in Table 1, replace "E.g"
with "e.g." 150: Typo appears to contain a doublespace
after the comma 228:
Improper usage (e.g. is used to join parenthetical material within a sentence) replace "E.g.,
The" with "For example, the" 244:
Erroneous capitalization "For"
should be "for" 344:
omit needless word change "and to not support" into "and not
support" -- omits "to", which adds nothing to meaning. 328:
use a form consistent with definition "Group scope.
All" to "Group scope: all" 328:
use a form consistent with definition "Message scope.
A" to "Message scope: a" 348: Confusing phrase ",
that is a parameter affecting the entire group" -- I don't know what this clause means.
Does it intend to explain why GroupExpiryTime can change dynamically?
It doesn't do a good job of it. I
suggest striking this clause and putting a period after GroupExpiryTime. 401: typo appears to contain a doublespace
in "the resending" 498:
Inconsistent capitalization change "Schema" to "schema" to conform
to previous line. 498-499:
Wordy sentence construction "If
there are additional elements that are not described in this specification present in message," Better
as "If a message contains additional elements not described in this specification," 546:
Inconsistent capitalization "@GroupId" should change to "@groupId",
making it consistent with the other attribute descriptions that follow. 606:
typo "incremented of 1" should be "incremented by
1" 629:
Erroneous capitalization "Note:
Given" to "Note: given" 629-630:
unclear sentence construction "in case Duplicate Elimination is required, when a received
message is processed," Better
"when a received message requiring Duplicate Elimination is processed," 673:
Improper usage (e.g. is used to join parenthetical material within a sentence) "E.g.,
If" to "For example, if" 691:
typo "things," to "things" -- there's no balancing
comma to the one following "things" and we can omit it. 693:
series not properly punctuated "element)" should really be "element)," -- but
most written English seems to omit that comma these days, so I don't insist on
adding it here. 759: omitted article "by reference-schema" to "by the
reference-schema" -- adds back "the" into the sentence 764:
omitted article "of ReplyTo" to "of the ReplyTo" 765:
omitted article "with URI" to "with a value of type URI" 783: consistent usage "groupId attribute" to "@groupId attribute", a change required twice on this line. This is
consistent with earlier sections describing attributes. 801:
typo "ispecifies" to
"specifies" 805:
change passive voice to active voice, reduce wordy phrase "which is polling" to "asking" 837: change passive voice to active voice "is using" to "uses" 837: awkward sentence construction (too many
parenthetical clauses joined by commas) ",
if" to " and" 861:
omitted article "Response"
to "The Response" 866: typo "case ," to "case," -- there's an extra space
between "case" and the comma 867: omitted article "without sequence" to "without a sequence" 872: consistent usage "from and to" to "@from and @to" 877: consistent usage "groupID attribute" to "@groupId attribute" 885: consistent usage "groupID attribute" to "@groupId attribute" 877: consistent usage, improper punctuation "groupId attribute," to
"@groupId attribute" -- also remove a superfluous comma after "attribute". 895: consistent usage "groupId attribute" to "@groupId attribute" 917-918: typo 917
ends with "numb" and 918 begins "er",
suggesting a space snuck into the word "number". 918: typo extra spaces between "15" and "for" 958: excess word "case of a" to "case a" -- omit "of" 958: Clumsy construction "In
case of a Response RM-Reply Pattern was required, and when the message cannot" Better:
"When a Response RM-Reply Pattern was required and the message cannot" 965: Clumsy construction "In
case a Callback or Poll RM-Reply Pattern was required, and when the message" Better: "When a Callback or Poll RM-Reply
Pattern was required and the message" 1938:
typo change "conditions" to "contributions" Tom: All comments except the one on Line 629 was applied to editing draft 1.01F. Full sentence is allowed to be introduced by Note: prefix in specifications. 5.2.4 Tony Graham Comments· Re: [wsrm]
1.1-1.02 editorial Tom: Change applied to draft 1.01F 6 Discussion of Document Progression.Tentative Schedule: June 3 – Draft 1.01 posted by Iwasa June 7 – editorial changes required to be posted to list. June 8: Tom Rutt posted editing draft contribution 1.01F incorporating editorial comments received June 8 – TC votes to approve CD at Teleconf, and also votes to submit to OASIS member vote. June 15 – submission sent to OASIS Staff 7 Potential Vote for CD progression· Groups - EditingDraft101F.pdf uploaded Potential motion: xxx Moves to progress editing Draft 1.01F, along with the four schemas posted by Sunil on 6/7/204, as WS-Reliability CD 1.01. 8 Potential Vote for OASIS Submission for Member vote of CDIf successful to progress to CD the following motion can be made: Potential motion: xxx moves to submit the CD 1.01 to OASIS staff before June 15, for OASIS Member vote. 9 Frequently Asked QuestionsTom posted the following: · Approved FAQ set for WSRM TC |
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