Re: [wsrm] Groups - ws-Reliability Candidate CD 1.1.1-diff-R1 (ws_reliability--CandidateCD-1-1-1-diff-R1.odt) modified

["iwasa" <kiwasa@jp.fujitsu.com>]

I have some comments to the draft so far.
Most are editorial comments, but there may be
some technical issues.

1. footer should have correct version number.
        Currently, it is 1.1.0.1
        It should be 1.1.1

2. Copyright should cover 2006.
        Currently it is "copyright 2003-2004"
        It should be "copyright 2003-2006"

3. errota location should be under appropriate folder
        Currently :
http://www.oasisopen.org/committees/wsrm/documents/errata/1.1/index.html
        It should be:
http://www.oasisopen.org/committees/wsrm/documents/errata/1.1.1/index.html

4. Question: Is it TC decision to remove all the previous editors
    for the spec with minor updates? I don't believe so.
    I feel it looks like not appropriate.

5. I think we need to update or add additional bindings in
    HTTP binding section. I need to check further.

Regards,

Iwasa






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> Document Description:
> Open office source doc for ws-reliability candidate cd 1.1.1, showing
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> R1 includes the changed "delivery failure" to "delivery failue
> notification" in 3.2.1.2
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