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Subject: comments: wss-saml-token-profile-1.0-cd-04


Document: wss-saml-token-profile-1.0-cd-04

Major bug on line 708 (see below).

Errata:

[line 138, 240, 242, 243, 502, 829, 838, 858] Replace "i.e." with "i.e.,".

[line 141] Restart numbering. (?)

[line 168] Strings "S11" and "S12" are set in wrong font.

[line 168] Replace "Urn: oasis:names:tc:SAML:1.0:assertion" with
"urn:oasis:names:tc:SAML:1.0:assertion".

[line 168] Replace "Urn: oasis:names:tc:SAML:1.0:protocol" with
"urn:oasis:names:tc:SAML:1.0:protocol".

[line 186] Replace "assertions" with "SAML assertions".

[line 186] Append "For example, a SAML Authentication Authority issues
authentication assertions.

[line 259] Use straight quotes instead of curved quotes.

[line 303] Contradictory phrase "<saml:AssertionID> attribute".

[line 551, 682] Delete extraneous colon.

[line 560, 691] Timestamp fails sanity check: NotBefore < IssueInstant
< NotOnOrAfter

[line 564, 695] Replace "xmlns" with "xmlns:saml".

[line 572, 703] Replace 'Format="..."' with
'Format="urn:oasis:names:tc:SAML:1.1:nameid-format:X509SubjectName"'.

[line 586, 592] Replace "oasis.open" with "oasis-open".

[line 587, 593] Join line with previous line.

[line 708] Replace "holder-of-key" with "sender-vouches".

[line 829] Hyphenate "authority-protected".

[line 838] Delete "and".

[line 839] Hyphenate "origin-protected".


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