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Subject: Comments on oasis-0007-wss-username-token-profile-1.0-merged.pdf
Hello, Here are editorial comments on oasis-0007-wss-username-token-profile-1.0-merged.pdf. - Lines 275-289 are added but they are same senteces in Lines 253-268. (forgot to remove lines?) - Line 82 "Acronyms and Abbreviations" should be moved to section 2.3 (as is the case with SOAP Message Security document). - Lines 66, 126 Missing period ("."). - Line 169 - Colon (":") would be period (".") - "This element" would be "<wsse:Password> element of wsse:PasswordText type". Or "This element" should be changed to "This type" and the sentence should be moved into the table for the description of wsse:PasswordText. (Refer to Blake's comment #5: http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/wss/200312/msg00049.html) - Lines 163, 167, 174 "Password" should be "wsse:Password" like "wsse:Nonce" at Line 177 (?) - Lines 241, 243 Do we have to capitalize "MAY NOT"? ("MAY NOT" is not a keyword in RFC 2119.) --- NISHIMURA Toshihiro (FAMILY Given) nishimura.toshi@jp.fujitsu.com XML/Web Services Technology Dept., STRATEGY AND TECHNOLOGY DIV., FUJITSU LIMITED
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