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Subject: Some editorial comments on Core spec
Hi,
I have some more editorial comments on WSS-SOAPMessageSecurity-011504.pdf .
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Lines 296, 539, 783, 1068, 1146, 1180, 1343, 1366
Please add ">" at the end of these lines.
Lines 430, 431, 433
"S:role" -> "S11:actor/S12:role"
Line 451
"S12:role" --> "S11:actor"
Line 462
"S:role" --> "S11:actor"
(Is it better to add a note such as "S12:role is used for SOAP 1.2."?)
Lines 480, 484, 487
These paragraphs after "... attribute:" should be bulleted.
Line 535
This line should not be indented because it is not the description for @{any}.
Line 737
The font used for "/wsse:SecurityTokenReference" is different from other lines.
And remove white space after "/wsse:SecurityTokenReference".
Line 769
Remove white space after "/wsse:SecurityTokenReference".
Line 987
"#STR-Transform" --> "...#STR-Transform"
Lines 1144,1145
duplicated "Envelope". Remove Line 1144 and reformat.
Line 1154
"S:" -> "S11:"
Lines 1178,1179
duplicated "Envelope". Remove Line 1178 and reformat.
Lines 1215,1216,1217,1220
"S:Envelope" --> "S11:Envelope"
"S:Header" --> "S11:Header"
"S:Body" --> "S11:Body"
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