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Subject: Some editorial comments on Core spec
Hi, I have some more editorial comments on WSS-SOAPMessageSecurity-011504.pdf . --------------------------------------------------------------- Lines 296, 539, 783, 1068, 1146, 1180, 1343, 1366 Please add ">" at the end of these lines. Lines 430, 431, 433 "S:role" -> "S11:actor/S12:role" Line 451 "S12:role" --> "S11:actor" Line 462 "S:role" --> "S11:actor" (Is it better to add a note such as "S12:role is used for SOAP 1.2."?) Lines 480, 484, 487 These paragraphs after "... attribute:" should be bulleted. Line 535 This line should not be indented because it is not the description for @{any}. Line 737 The font used for "/wsse:SecurityTokenReference" is different from other lines. And remove white space after "/wsse:SecurityTokenReference". Line 769 Remove white space after "/wsse:SecurityTokenReference". Line 987 "#STR-Transform" --> "...#STR-Transform" Lines 1144,1145 duplicated "Envelope". Remove Line 1144 and reformat. Line 1154 "S:" -> "S11:" Lines 1178,1179 duplicated "Envelope". Remove Line 1178 and reformat. Lines 1215,1216,1217,1220 "S:Envelope" --> "S11:Envelope" "S:Header" --> "S11:Header" "S:Body" --> "S11:Body" ---------------------------------------------------------------
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