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Subject: Some editorial comments on Core spec


Hi,

I have some more editorial comments on WSS-SOAPMessageSecurity-011504.pdf .

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Lines 296, 539, 783, 1068, 1146, 1180, 1343, 1366
  Please add ">" at the end of these lines.

Lines 430, 431, 433
  "S:role" -> "S11:actor/S12:role"

Line 451
  "S12:role" --> "S11:actor"

Line 462
  "S:role"   --> "S11:actor"
  (Is it better to add a note such as "S12:role is used for SOAP 1.2."?)

Lines 480, 484, 487
  These paragraphs after "... attribute:" should be bulleted.

Line 535
  This line should not be indented because it is not the description for @{any}.

Line 737 
  The font used for "/wsse:SecurityTokenReference" is different from other lines.
  And remove white space after "/wsse:SecurityTokenReference".

Line 769
  Remove white space after "/wsse:SecurityTokenReference".

Line 987
  "#STR-Transform"  --> "...#STR-Transform"

Lines 1144,1145
  duplicated "Envelope". Remove Line 1144 and reformat.
 
Line 1154
  "S:" -> "S11:"

Lines 1178,1179
  duplicated "Envelope". Remove Line 1178 and reformat.

Lines 1215,1216,1217,1220
  "S:Envelope" --> "S11:Envelope"
  "S:Header"   --> "S11:Header"
  "S:Body"     --> "S11:Body"
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