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Subject: Comments on XACML 2.0 Working Draft 11
Attached is a marked up copy of Section 7 and the References from XACML 2.0 Working Draft 11. The marks represent my comments. The Section numbering may be incorrect, since I tried to delete large blocks of text where I had no comments. I had minor, primarily editorial comments on Sections 7.2.1 Structured Attributes 7.2.3 Multivalued Attributes 7.2.4 Attribute Matching 7.3 Expression Evaluation (get rid of <SubjectAttributeSelector> - no such thing) 7.8 Condition Evaluation I had more substantive comments on the following Sections: 7.6 Target Evaluation The current text omits the disjunctive <Subject>, <Resource>, <Action>, and <Environment> level of evaluation. I have proposed text. I also supplied decision tables for <Target>, <Subjects>, <Subject>, and <SubjectMatch> (with note saying <Resources>, etc. are analogous). 7.12 Hierarchical Resources I proposed text we could use to replace most of this section if the Profiles for Hierarchical Resources and Requests for Multiple Resources are approved. References Place-holder references for the two profiles that would be referenced from the proposed Section 7.12. Anne -- Anne H. Anderson Email: Anne.Anderson@Sun.COM Sun Microsystems Laboratories 1 Network Drive,UBUR02-311 Tel: 781/442-0928 Burlington, MA 01803-0902 USA Fax: 781/442-1692
Anne's comments on Section 7 and References
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