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Subject: wd-20 issues (mostly typos)
7.19.3 Missing attributes "If, in this case, and a status code is supplied, then the value" - Remove "and". A.2 Data-types "XPath expression The "urn:oasis:names:tc:xacml:3.0:data-type:xpathExpression" primitive type represents an XPath expression selects over the XML in a <Content> element." - Remove "selects"? A.3.10 Bag functions "urn:oasis:names:tc:xacml:x.x:function:type-one-and-only This function SHALL take a bag of 'type' values as an argument and SHALL return a value of '-type'." - "'-type'" should be "'type'". "urn:oasis:names:tc:xacml:x.x:function:type-is-in This function SHALL take an argument of 'type' as the first argument and a bag of type values" - Second "type" should be "'type'". A.3.12 Higher-order bag functions "urn:oasis:names:tc:xacml:1.0:function:all-of This function applies a Boolean function between a specific primitive values" - "values" should be "value" "urn:oasis:names:tc:xacml:1.0:function:all-of-any This function applies a Boolean function between the elements of two bags. The expression SHALL be "True" if and only if the supplied predicate is 'True'" - Last "True" should be wrapped in double quotes, not single. "urn:oasis:names:tc:xacml:1.0:function:any-of-all The expression SHALL be evaluated as if the "rn:oasis:names:tc:xacml:1.0:function:any-of"" - URI should start with "urn:", not "rn:" B.4 Subject attributes "urn:oasis:names:tc:xacml:1.0:subject:authn-locality:ip-address The corresponding attribute SHALL be of data-type "http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema#string". urn:oasis:names:tc:xacml:1.0:subject:authn-locality:dns-name The corresponding attribute SHALL be of data-type "http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema#string"." - Why aren't these of types urn:oasis:names:tc:xacml:2.0:data-type:ipAddress and urn:oasis:names:tc:xacml:2.0:data-type:dnsName? C.1 Extended Indeterminate values "The output of a combining algorithm which does not track the extended set of "Indeterminate" values MUST be treated as "Indeterminate{DP}"" - Only if the output is Indeterminate. C.4 Permit-overrides "5. Otherwise, if decision is "Deny", the result is "Deny"." - "if decision" should be "if any decision". C.6 Deny-unless-permit "The decisions may be processed in any order, so the set of obligations provided by this algorithm is not deterministic." - And advice. C.10 Legacy Deny-overrides "for( i=0 ; i < lengthOf(ruless) ; i++ )" - "ruless" should be "rules" Thanks, Ray
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