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Subject: [public review comments]TC Admin comments on eXtensible Access Control Markup Language (XACML) Version 3.0
Members of the OASIS eXtensible Access Control Markup Language (XACML) TC, TC Administration provides the following comments for the public review of the above Committee Specification Drafts. The public review was announced on 6 October 2011. See http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/xacml/201110/msg00004.html General: These do not require correcting but we provide them for your consideration. 1. References for OASIS documents don't use the recommended OASIS citation format. For example: [Hier] OASIS Committee Draft 03, XACML v3.0 Hierarchical Resource Profile Version 1.0, 11 March 2010, http://docs.oasis-open.org/xacml/3.0/xacml-3.0-hierarchical-v1-spec-cd-03-en.doc The citation construction that we use when creating citation formats for OASIS documents is: [CITATION-LABEL] Work Product title (italicized). Approval date (DD Month YYYY). Stage Identifier and Revision Number (e.g., Committee Specification Draft 01). Principal URI (version-specific URI, e.g., including the filename component with stage and revision: /somespec-v1.0-csd01.html). Also note that for reader convenience, we link to the HTML. So, for Hier, this would be: [Hier] <ital>XACML v3.0 Hierarchical Resource Profile Version 1.0</ital>. 11 March 2010. Committee Specification Draft 03. http://docs.oasis-open.org/xacml/3.0/xacml-3.0-hierarchical-v1-spec-cd-03-en.html 2. Line 210 - reference [CM] - title has a duplicate word - "Character model model for the World Wide Web 1.0". Please let us know if you have any questions on these. -- /chet ---------------- Chet Ensign Director of Standards Development and TC Administration OASIS: Advancing open standards for the information society http://www.oasis-open.org Primary: +1 973-378-3472 Mobile: +1 201-341-1393 Follow OASIS on: LinkedIn: http://linkd.in/OASISopen Twitter: http://twitter.com/OASISopen Facebook: http://facebook.com/oasis.open
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