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Subject: RE: [xacml] Groups - XACML v3.0 Related and Nested Entities Profile Version 1.0 uploaded
> > I have attached some ideas for diagrams, please treat them as no more > than a suggestion. It might also be good to have a diagram which > suggests how the nested and related abstractions relate to the physical > layout of the request context. > > Turning the diagrams on their side (with the attribute names running > down the left side) will make them relate more directly to the layout > in the request context. Presenting the same information in both a > diagram and XML, with boxes around the entities and highlighted > attribute names and values, should make the correspondence clear. > You might want to consider first a simple diagram to illustrate the difference between Nested and Related located near the introduction and a little later a diagram which shows the how these abstractions related to the Request Context layout. > Also taking into account Erik's comments about the introduction, I see > two possibilities. > I could add something like the suggested text to the end of the > introduction after pulling out the normative bits into an immediately > following section, or I could rework the text into a sort of executive > summary of the profile as the new introduction followed by some > background discussion (essentially, the current introduction minus the > normative bits) and then the normative bits. I'm leaning towards the > latter. > I think either could work, but I also lean towards the latter. > I was thinking of changing to "bags of values" instead of "bags of a > primitive data-type" > to avoid the anachronism where possible. > Sounds good. Hal
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