RE: [xliff-seg] Additional attributes proposal document

["Magnus Martikainen" <Magnus@trados.com>]

Hi Andrzej,

Thank you very much for an excellent job on this. I have read it
carefully and I have only a couple of minor comments:

* "...without reference to one or more following <trans-unit> elements"
- I suggest changing "following" to "surrounding".

* "After careful considerations, the XLIFF Segmentation Sub-Committee
has come to the conclusion that the following additions are require to
the XLIFF 1.1 standard"
- typo: "require" should be "required".

* "All <trans-unit> elements that are encompassed by a <group> element
that has its merged-translations element set to "yes" are required to
have a equivalent-translation attribute set to the value of "no"."
- In fact there can still be <trans-unit> elements which happen to be
equivalent translations inside the <group>, so I would propose to change
this to: "<trans-unit> elements that are encompassed by a <group>
element that has its merged-translations element set to "yes" normally
have a equivalent-translation attribute set to the value of "no"."

* "... the <source element..."
- missing an angular bracket.

* In the inserted section 2.7, "The default value of this attribute will
be "yes". The other possible value will be "no"..."
- change both instances of "will be" to "is".

* For sake of completeness, could you also provide suggested
descriptions for the new attributes, as they should appear in section
3.3 of the specification?

Cheers,
Magnus

-----Original Message-----
From: Andrzej Zydron [mailto:azydron@xml-intl.com] 
Sent: Sunday, February 06, 2005 1:18 PM
To: xliff-seg@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [xliff-seg] Additional attributes proposal document

Hi Everyone,

Please find attached the first draft of my submission. This one deals 
with the additional attributes. I will complete the next part concerning

the description of the method segmenting and secondary extraction of 
XLIFF files by the beginning of the next week.

Best Regards,

AZ

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