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Subject: Feedback on WD03
Here’s my notes – they are
against the word doc with the edits/changes marked Line 27 (table 1): I think we need to
define “local” now since its use has been deprecated? Line 30: I think we need to define “local”
now since its use has been deprecated? Line 62: s/web servers/web infrastructure/ Line 384: define “target resource” Line 389-392: Instead of using the MUST
language, isn’t it more comprehensible to say “is relative to the
authority producing this XRD”? Line 394-395, 399-400, 404-405: the
language “MUST be an absolute identifier MUST be assigned by the same
parent authority” doesn’t seem to make sense – segments get
assigned, not absolute identifiers… Line 413: the word “management”
in the title of section 4.2.4 seems completely redundant/useless? These are
simply Service Endpoint Elements, right? How about Service Endpoint
Descriptors? Line 430, 445, 465: I’d make these sections
children of 4.2.4 rather than peer following sections Line 568 vs 572: I might be reading this
wrong, but it seems inconsistent that in line 568, you can use either,
but under line 572, you MUST begin with HTTPS HEAD? Line 571: What “protocol” are
we talking about here? Line 1696: (Section 11) From a document
flow point of view, it seems like this section should be right after section 4
(XRDS documents) Line 1728: Figure 8 – the lines from
a node to another line are not really well defined – the thing is that
the line (“forward reference”) is not pointing to a single edge,
but to an entire path of edges… not sure how to demonstrate this in the
graph but the current graph is a bit misleading… Line 1757: s/authority/resource/ ? Line 1765: What does “edit”
mean here? Line 1786: What does “edit”
mean here? Line 1896: Can two XRD’s Ref each
other instead of having a directed relationship? Line 2105: Section 13 seems like it should
go before sec 12? Line 2113-: this is odd – the parameter
is only for proxy & recursive resolvers, right? This wouldn’t apply
everywhere would it? Line 2213: Define what a “service
reference” is? Line 2225- 2231: Why are only HTTP URLs
allowed here? Line 2427-2429: I think I’ve raised
this before, but adding this rule makes verifying XRDS results more complicated
and seems like an ugly hack |
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