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Subject: end-to-end read-through of WD11 ED08


Here's what I found during my end-to-end read-through of WD11 ED08.

Actual typos, as opposed to stylistic suggestions, are marked with an asterisk.

102: s/balance of the/remaining/
143: s/interpretation, however/interpretation. However,/
*226: s/provided/provide/
*227: s/provided/provide/
236: s/may also function/may function/
236: s/and an/and also as an/
*341: s/may extended/may be extended/
*344: s/namespaces prefixes/namespace prefixes/
*351: s/MUST passed/MUST be passed/
*475: s/reports/report/
533: s/a interchangeable/an interchangeable/
551: s/are used/is used/
611: s/are used/is used/
644: s/However/However,/
*657: s/for processing/rules for processing/
703: s/However/However,/
*807: s/there/their/
865: s/However/However,/
*868: s/particuarly/particularly/
*926: s/fourth above/fourth options above/
961: s/However/However,/
967: s/rules, however/rules. However,/
995: s/white space/whitespace/
*1045: s/nodefault_r/nodefault_t/
*1102: s/resported/reported/
*1132: s/resported/reported/
1180: s/However/However,/
*1190 (almost entirely blank page; can formatting be improved here?)
*1230: s/See section 0./See section 11.5./
1263: s/However/However,/
1263: s/only effective/effective only/
1286: s/however/however,/
*1305: s/that is/that it is/
1307: s/However/However,/
1335: s/a identifier/an identifier/
1339: s/a identifier/an identifier/
*1352: s/syntatic/syntactic/
*1457: (mentioned example is missing)
1580: s/However/However,/
*1587: s/valid/be valid/
1705: s/However/However,/
*1735: s/provide that/provided that/
*1741: s/8.1are/8.1 are/
*1776: s/prior any/prior to any/
*1802: s/planéte/planète/
*1803: s/planéte/planète/
*1807: s/plan%E9te/plan%E8te/
*1809: s/plan%25E9te/plan%25E8te/
*1814: s/plan%25E9te/plan%25E8te/
*1820: s/plan%E9te/plan%E8te/
*1843: s/nodefault_r/nodefault_p/
*1859: s/section 0./section 11.5./
1863: s/However/However,/
*1949: s/authority in/authority/
1950: s/redirect, however/redirect; however,/
*1984: s/orginated/originated/
*2365: s/requeste service/requested service/
2367: s/first encounters/encounters/
*2405: s/The set/On the set/
2430: s/govern/governs/
*2437: s/Precedence/precedence/
*2455: s/overriden/overridden/
*2455: s/the nodefault/a nodefault/
*2469: s/non-emtpy/non-empty/
*2471: s/Prior to comparsion/Prior to comparison/
*2476: s/in comparisions/in comparisons/
*2478: s/scheme-specific comparision/scheme-specific comparison/
*2493: s/in comparisions./in comparisons./
*2496: s/before comparision./before comparison./
*2511: s/of of/of/
2523: s/govern/governs/
*2563: s/preceeding/preceding/g
*2566: s/Postive/Positive/
*2567: s/Postive/Positive/
*2806: s/the the/the/
*2827: s/hierachical/hierarchical/
*2905: s/satisifies/satisfies/
*2935: s/satisifies/satisfies/
*2967: s/satisifies/satisfies/
*3000: s/satisifies/satisfies/
*3067: s/satisifies/satisfies/
*3085: s/If/if/
*3109: s/categoryes/categories/
*3237: s/use/uses/
*3237: s/an an/an/
*3375: s/protocols/protocol/
*3384: s/identifiers/identifier/
*3394: s/section 5.3/section 5.3 to ensure that/
*3963: s/in in Table/in Table/
4021: s/flag, however/flag. However,/
*4031: s/but not/but is not/

=Kermit


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