[Date Prev] | [Thread Prev] | [Thread Next] | [Date Next] -- [Date Index] | [Thread Index] | [List Home]
Subject: RE: [xri] end-to-end read-through of WD11 ED08
Kermit, Great job! You win the prize for the most good catches beyond what any spellchecker could do. Out of everything you listed there were only two I didn't incorporate (see # below), but they were very minor. I'm now working on incorporating John's comments on the R&R section. =Drummond > -----Original Message----- > From: kermit.snelson@gmail.com [mailto:kermit.snelson@gmail.com] On Behalf > Of Kermit Snelson > Sent: Sunday, November 11, 2007 6:22 PM > To: OASIS XRI TC > Subject: [xri] end-to-end read-through of WD11 ED08 > > Here's what I found during my end-to-end read-through of WD11 ED08. > > Actual typos, as opposed to stylistic suggestions, are marked with an > asterisk. > > 102: s/balance of the/remaining/ > 143: s/interpretation, however/interpretation. However,/ > *226: s/provided/provide/ > *227: s/provided/provide/ > 236: s/may also function/may function/ > 236: s/and an/and also as an/ # I skipped these last two as all four of the other conformance targets are "also" functions an authority server can perform. > *341: s/may extended/may be extended/ > *344: s/namespaces prefixes/namespace prefixes/ > *351: s/MUST passed/MUST be passed/ > *475: s/reports/report/ > 533: s/a interchangeable/an interchangeable/ > 551: s/are used/is used/ > 611: s/are used/is used/ > 644: s/However/However,/ > *657: s/for processing/rules for processing/ > 703: s/However/However,/ > *807: s/there/their/ > 865: s/However/However,/ > *868: s/particuarly/particularly/ > *926: s/fourth above/fourth options above/ > 961: s/However/However,/ > 967: s/rules, however/rules. However,/ > 995: s/white space/whitespace/ > *1045: s/nodefault_r/nodefault_t/ > *1102: s/resported/reported/ > *1132: s/resported/reported/ > 1180: s/However/However,/ > *1190 (almost entirely blank page; can formatting be improved here?) > *1230: s/See section 0./See section 11.5./ > 1263: s/However/However,/ > 1263: s/only effective/effective only/ > 1286: s/however/however,/ > *1305: s/that is/that it is/ > 1307: s/However/However,/ > 1335: s/a identifier/an identifier/ > 1339: s/a identifier/an identifier/ > *1352: s/syntatic/syntactic/ > *1457: (mentioned example is missing) > 1580: s/However/However,/ > *1587: s/valid/be valid/ > 1705: s/However/However,/ > *1735: s/provide that/provided that/ > *1741: s/8.1are/8.1 are/ > *1776: s/prior any/prior to any/ > *1802: s/planéte/plančte/ > *1803: s/planéte/plančte/ > *1807: s/plan%E9te/plan%E8te/ > *1809: s/plan%25E9te/plan%25E8te/ > *1814: s/plan%25E9te/plan%25E8te/ > *1820: s/plan%E9te/plan%E8te/ > *1843: s/nodefault_r/nodefault_p/ > *1859: s/section 0./section 11.5./ > 1863: s/However/However,/ > *1949: s/authority in/authority/ > 1950: s/redirect, however/redirect; however,/ > *1984: s/orginated/originated/ > *2365: s/requeste service/requested service/ > 2367: s/first encounters/encounters/ > *2405: s/The set/On the set/ > 2430: s/govern/governs/ > *2437: s/Precedence/precedence/ > *2455: s/overriden/overridden/ > *2455: s/the nodefault/a nodefault/ > *2469: s/non-emtpy/non-empty/ > *2471: s/Prior to comparsion/Prior to comparison/ > *2476: s/in comparisions/in comparisons/ > *2478: s/scheme-specific comparision/scheme-specific comparison/ > *2493: s/in comparisions./in comparisons./ > *2496: s/before comparision./before comparison./ > *2511: s/of of/of/ > 2523: s/govern/governs/ > *2563: s/preceeding/preceding/g > *2566: s/Postive/Positive/ > *2567: s/Postive/Positive/ > *2806: s/the the/the/ > *2827: s/hierachical/hierarchical/ > *2905: s/satisifies/satisfies/ > *2935: s/satisifies/satisfies/ > *2967: s/satisifies/satisfies/ > *3000: s/satisifies/satisfies/ > *3067: s/satisifies/satisfies/ > *3085: s/If/if/ > *3109: s/categoryes/categories/ > *3237: s/use/uses/ > *3237: s/an an/an/ > *3375: s/protocols/protocol/ # I kept this one because we define 3 trusted resolution protocols. > *3384: s/identifiers/identifier/ > *3394: s/section 5.3/section 5.3 to ensure that/ > *3963: s/in in Table/in Table/ > 4021: s/flag, however/flag. However,/ > *4031: s/but not/but is not/ > > =Kermit
[Date Prev] | [Thread Prev] | [Thread Next] | [Date Next] -- [Date Index] | [Thread Index] | [List Home]