Re: work product review

[Drummond Reed <drummond.reed@xdi.org>]

Mary, thanks for the list. I think there's one mistake, though - Breno de Medeiros of Google is on the current roster (as a Voting Member - I just confirmed that myself) and was very involved in the spec. Perhaps it was a matter of the way his last name may have appeared in your cross-check (it's listed on the roster as "de Medeiros, Mr. Breno")?

Will and Eran, we'll make going over these the main agenda item for tomrorow's TC call. I'll send out the agenda shortly.

=Drummond

On Wed, Oct 28, 2009 at 6:02 PM, Mary McRae <mary.mcrae@oasis-open.org> wrote:

The following issues have been identified in the submitted work products and must be corrected before they can be uploaded to docs.oasis-open.org and the Public Review announced to the membership:

1. Please reprocess Docbook using XSLs from latest version of the toolkit (waiting for Ken to send me the zip tonight/tomorrow). The styles and layout are incorrect.

2. Status (Committee Draft 01) must be on a separate line

3. Date must be on a separate line

4. Document identifier: please remove. Not part of the template.

5. Specification URIs: See templates for style (docs.oasis-open.org/templates/)
Need This Version, Previous Version and Latest Version; all 3 document formats, one of which is declared as Authoritative; i.e.
This Version:
  http://docs.oasis-open.org/xri/xrd/v1.0/cd01/xrd-1.0-cd01.html
  http://docs.oasis-open.org/xri/xrd/v1.0/cd01/xrd-1.0-cd01.xml (Authoritative)
  http://docs.oasis-open.org/xri/xrd/v1.0/cd01/xrd-1.0-cd01.pdf
Previous Version:
       N/A
 Latest Version:
 http://docs.oasis-open.org/xri/xrd/v1.0/xrd-1.0.html
 http://docs.oasis-open.org/xri/xrd/v1.0/xrd-1.0.xml
 http://docs.oasis-open.org/xri/xrd/v1.0/xrd-1.0.pdf

6. Technical Committee Section requires hypertext link to TC homepage:
 http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/tc_home.php?wg_abbrev=xri

7. Chairs:
Since Yahoo! is not an organizational member, the company name cannot appear

7. Abstract Section must appear after Related Work Section

8. Related Work section should include hypertext links to specification locations

9. Ensure appropriate footer information is incorporated in PDF output (this is included in the updated xslts)

10. Section 1.3 should be entitled Non-Normative References rather than Informative References

11. In the Participants section, the following changes must be made:
Joseph Holsten: delete - not in the current roster
Nika Jones: remove company name; not an organizational member
Breno de Medeiros: delete - not on the current roster
William Tan: delete - not on the current roster
Gabe Wachob: remove company name; not an organizational member

Additionally, a namespace document must be supplied (see http://docs.oasis-open.org/templates/namespace.html)


Regards,

Mary

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