[OASIS Issue Tracker] Created: (AMQP-43) Review comments from Ram Jeyaraman

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Review comments from Ram Jeyaraman
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                 Key: AMQP-43
                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/AMQP-43
             Project: OASIS Advanced Message Queuing Protocol (AMQP) TC
          Issue Type: Improvement
            Reporter: Rob Godfrey
            Assignee: Rob Godfrey


Front Page:
-          Add Working Draft number.
-          Suggest changing "Thu 11/24/2011" to "Thursday 11/24/11". Avoid using the short form of the day.
-          Suggest changing "OASIS AMQP TC" to "OASIS AMQP Technical Committee", in all occurrences.
-          Suggest changing "Additional Artifcats" to "Additional Artifacts".
-          Suggest changing Part 1: Types - "the AMQP type" to "AMQP type". Similarly, in the following bullet items pertaining to Part 2, Part 3, Part 4, Part 5.
-          Footer: Add a space between copyright symbol and "OASIS".

:Copyright:
-          "Please see http://www.oasisopen.org/who/trademark.php (http://www.oasis-open.org/who/trademark.php) for above guidance". The hyperlink is repeated. Need to check with OASIS staff and correct this.

Section 3.4: Suggest adding periods after end of each bullet item.

Part 4 Transactions: In all figures, the letter 'F' in the term "TRANSFER" uses a different font, and a result appears smaller than the surrounding characters. Suggest fixing this.

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