RE: [amqp] Groups - AMQP Core Specification

Also, please verify that all XML, XML Schema, and code snippets in the specification are well formed and valid. Same comment applies to the DTD file – ensure it is machine executable.

From: amqp@lists.oasis-open.org [mailto:amqp@lists.oasis-open.org] On Behalf Of Ram Jeyaraman
Sent: Thursday, February 02, 2012 3:39 PM
To: Rob Godfrey; amqp@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: RE: [amqp] Groups - AMQP Core Specification - Working Draft 4 uploaded

My comments on the latest Working Draft:

1. Section 0.3 Acknowledgements

a. Add Mr. Stanley Lewis (Progress Software)

b. Add Ms. Kimberly Palko (Red Hat)

c. Change affiliation of John O’Hara to Individual

d. For reference, here is the roster http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/amqp/members/roster.php

2. Appendix A DTD is missing in the PDF document.

Here are some comments from Chet (TC admin):

1. Add Revision History

a. This could be a new section (0.4 Revision History) in Part 0: Overview chapter. Just a high-level history is sufficient. For example, a table with columns (Revision number, Revision date, Description of changes) and four rows each one corresponding to Working Draft 1 through 4. For example, the first row { Working Draft 1, <date>, <list of issues addressed> }. The revision history is useful for reviewers who have not been a part of the specification development and is particularly useful during public review.

2. Front page

a. The HTML and PDF versions use different capitalizations for “This version”, “Previous version”, “Latest version”, “Additional artifacts”, “Related work”, “Citation format”. Suggest using the capitalizations as indicated above in both the PDF and HTML formats.

b. Additional artifacts

i. Suggest changing the list item “Appendix A: DTD” to “XML Document Type Definition (DTD)” and remove the prepend “Appendix A: ”

From: amqp@lists.oasis-open.org [mailto:amqp@lists.oasis-open.org] On Behalf Of Rob Godfrey
Sent: Thursday, February 02, 2012 1:41 PM
To: amqp@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [amqp] Groups - AMQP Core Specification - Working Draft 4 uploaded

Submitter's message
The first upload of Working Draft 4 seemed to have come from a bad build, with some links trying to go to wd03 rather than wd04 - have uploaded a rebuilt version. I've not upped the version number as there have been no changes to the document in SVN, This is merely a rebuild.

thanks to Dave (again) for pointing this out :-)

Cheers,
Rob
-- Mr. Rob Godfrey

Document Name: AMQP Core Specification - Working Draft 4

Description
Updated from working draft 3 to correct the copyright date from 2011 to
2012 in the PDF file

(First upload of WD04 seemed to have a bad build, with some links trying to
go to wd03 rather than wd04 - have uploaded a rebuilt version)
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Submitter: Mr. Rob Godfrey
Group: OASIS Advanced Message Queuing Protocol (AMQP) TC
Folder: Working Documents
Date submitted: 2012-02-02 13:40:31
Revision: 1

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