editorial comments on draft

[John Fuller <jfuller@wernervas.com>]

id            ED-1
title         Typographical, grammatical cleanup
status        Unassigned
topic         admin
class         Editorial
document      wd-asap-spec-01d.doc
section
raised by     John Fuller
owner
description
p1,  (line 31)   <missing period>
p4,  (line 107)  "An SOAP"
p9,  (line 291)  "how a work it performed"
p10, (line 322)  "used for all the regular purpose such as"
p10, (line 345)  ?? should "xmlns:aws" read "xmlns:as" ??
p15, (line 544)  "A collection elements"
p16, (line 589)  <incomplete sentence>
p16, (line 592)  "that will explains"
p23, (line 934)  <Ending tag should match>
p25, (line 1001) "ResutData"
proposal
p1,  (line 31)   <add period>    
p4,  (line 107)  "A SOAP"
p9,  (line 291)  "how the work is performed"
p10, (line 322)  "for"
p10, (line 345)  ?? "xmlns:as" ??
p15, (line 544)  "A collection of elements"
p16, (line 589)  <complete the thought>
p16, (line 592)  "which explains"
p23, (line 934)  <ex: Change /as:Instance to /as:InstanceKey>
p25, (line 1001) "ResultData"
resolution

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id            ED-2
title         Completeness, Introduce "AWS" abbreviation
status        Unassigned
topic         admin
class         Editorial
document      wd-asap-spec-01d.doc
section
raised by     John Fuller
owner
description
AWS used in text not defined in terminology
proposal
Edit line 222, in 1.6 Terminology,
Replace "Asynchronous webservice" with "Asynchronous web service (AWS)"
resolution

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id            AS-1
title         Completeness, Define Priority element type
status        Unassigned
topic         admin
class         Editorial
document      wd-asap-spec-01d.doc
section       4.3, 5.4
raised by     John Fuller
owner
description
Sections 4.3 and 5.4 reference a Priority element without providing
a reference.
proposal
Define the data type for the priority element
or indicate it is "to be defined"
resolution