Re: [bcm] Groups - BCM.Executive White Paper.2003-10-15.pdf uploaded

["David RR Webber" <david@drrw.info>]

Laila,

We have put out three items - the Introduction PPT, the Executive WP, and
the Specification.

My sense is review these in that order - and give us feedback on how
well the message is projected and is coherent and consistent.

Thanks, DW

----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Moretto,Laila K." <lmoretto@mitre.org>
To: "David RR Webber" <david@drrw.info>
Cc: <bcm@lists.oasis-open.org>; <BPeat@eProcessSolutions.com>
Sent: Wednesday, October 15, 2003 5:03 PM
Subject: Re: [bcm] Groups - BCM.Executive White Paper.2003-10-15.pdf
uploaded


> I am trying to get caught up with things so I can be ready for our next
telecon.  What is the most important thing to do before next telecon?????
>
> Let me know so I can make sure I do it.
>
> Thanks,
>
> Laila Moretto
>
> David RR Webber wrote:
>
> > Bruce,
> >
> > Looks good.  I presume you are looking for comments before this goes out
to
> > a wider audience.
> >
> > My 2 cents - page 7 top of - three key aspects - seems to miss the mark.
> >
> > Point 1) and 2) seem to be saying the same thing - and in any case this
> > appears to be the
> > wrong take away - and does not flow into the next section that starts
out
> > "Layers".
> >
> > The PPT posted last week hits the right 3 take aways here IMHO - see
slide
> > #9.
> >
> > Otherwise - not had time to review in real depth - but rest looks to
hold
> > together.
> >
> > Do we need a table of contents - since the paper is more than 7 pages
long?
> >
> > Thanks, DW.
> >
> > ----- Original Message -----
> > From: <BPeat@eProcessSolutions.com>
> > To: <bcm@lists.oasis-open.org>
> > Sent: Wednesday, October 15, 2003 7:12 AM
> > Subject: [bcm] Groups - BCM.Executive White Paper.2003-10-15.pdf
uploaded
> >
> > > The document BCM.Executive White Paper.2003-10-15.pdf has been
submitted
> > by Bruce Peat (BPeat@eProcessSolutions.com) to the OASIS
Business-Centric
> > Methodology TC document repository.
> > >
> > > Document Description:
> > > Executive White Paper -
> > > Business-Centric Methodology
> > > For Enterprise Agility and Interoperability   format: PDF
> > >
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> > >
> >
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