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Subject: Re: [bdxr] Updates to the SMP document
Dear all
Attached the work in progress with the SMP document. I have implemented the changes we talked about at the last meeting. New added/modified texts are marked with green for your review. The section marked in red I believe we can delete. It is partly information
specific to START and LIME, and the rest is redundant.
Looking forward to your comments.
Best regards,
Kenneth
From: Kenneth Bengtsson <kenneth@alfa1lab.com>
Date: Monday, June 9, 2014 at 11:47 AM To: "bdxr@lists.oasis-open.org" <bdxr@lists.oasis-open.org> Subject: [bdxr] Updates to the SMP document Dear all
As promised I have reformatted the SMP document using the starter document and OASIS styles – please see attached.
I also gave the document an in-depth review trying to look at it with new eyes, and made note of a number of changes I believe to be necessary and/or major improvements. The main issues are:
Actual changes that I've made to the document so far:
Please note that the attached document is not yet a finished working draft. There are still changes to be made. I have highlighted all places in the text that I believe we need to address.
Due to unforeseen events out of my influence, I am unfortunately not able to make the conference call this week. If someone is able to step in and chair the meeting please let me know and I will send you the Gotomeeting credentials. If not we unfortunately
must cancel this week's call, or reschedule to a different timeslot this week.
Best regards,
Kenneth
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