Re: [bdxr] Business Document Envelope v1.0 CSD02WD03

[Kenneth Bengtsson <kbengtsson@efact.pe>]

On 5/28/15, 12:50 PM, "G. Ken Holman" <gkholman@CraneSoftwrights.com> wrote:

>At 2015-05-28 16:50 +0000, Kenneth Bengtsson wrote:
>>Section 2.4.2, the rationale for the PayloadExternalReference seems 
>>to be copy-pasted from the RelevantExternalReference and not the 
>>corresponding text.
>
>Ouch!  Missed that.  The text proposed earlier offline has been incorporated.
>
>>Section 2.5, the ID of the external reference class also supports 
>>requirement BDE-19.
>
>Yes, of course.
>
>>Perhaps in the description and rationale for the ID we could combine 
>>the texts from RelevantExternalReference and 
>>PayloadExternalReference to clarify this (I can come up with a 
>>suggestion if you want).
>
>Would you accept the following as a basis for your edits?
>
>Supports: BDE-10, BDE-19
>Name (UDT): ID (Identifier)
>Description: An identifier through which an external resource can be 
>located or de-referenced.
>Cardinality: 1
>Rationale: Resources not contained within the envelope need to be 
>identified by some mechanism through which the resource can be obtained.

Sounds good to me, no need for any editing.

>
>>A part from that everything looks great to me!
>
>I'll make up a csd02wd04 with your edits of the above.

Thank you! :-)

>
>Thanks for the detailed review and for finding the mistakes!
>
>. . . . . . . . Ken
>
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