Re: [cacao] Minor corrections needed in CACAO Security Playbooks (for future)

[Bret Jordan <bret.jordan@broadcom.com>]

TC,

We should probably defang these entries in the appendix to prevent them from becoming URLs in the HTML version.Â

Thanks,

Bret

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On Mon, Jan 18, 2021 at 10:32 AM Paul Knight <paul.knight@oasis-open.org> wrote:

Hi CACAO TC members and Editors,

Congratulations on publishing the TC's first Committee specification!

During publication, we noted a few issues in the text which should be fixed for future publication stages:

- Many blocks of text in Appendix A are "invisibly" hyperlinked to "https://datastore/getactivethreats". While not easily visible as hyperlinks in the DOCX or PDF formats, these are visible in the HTML format [1] as blue underlines. The hyperlinks should be removed.

-ÂAlso in appendix A, the sections A 1.2.1 Workflow and A 1.2.2 Actions have no text.

[1] HTML format -Âhttps://docs.oasis-open.org/cacao/security-playbooks/v1.0/cs01/security-playbooks-v1.0-cs01.html.

Best regards,

Paul

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