Initial comments on 015 spec'.

["David RR Webber" <david@drrw.info>]

Team,

 

Martin has very tactfully noted to me offlist that

"all the waffle in the front selling CAM is not needed

in the spec'" - or words to that effect!

 

I agree with this - in fact I'd already sorta stepped down

this road with the Abstract that is new to 015.

 

Therefore I'm proposing to move what is currently

in the "Introduction" section to a separate document

called "CAM Design Backgrounder" and just post that

to Kavi as such for any party who may care about that

in future.

 

Then promote the Abstract up to be the Introduction,

with maybe just a paragraph or two giving broad

introductory details (just some low grade light waffle!).

 

Anyway - as I'm consolidating all these change

requests - this is an FYI that I'll make these edits

unless someone feels we absolutely need the

extended introduction to remain.  In which case

please let us know accordingly.

 

The plan remains to consolidate all feedback and

then publish the revised documents once we

have all that reconciled.

 

Thanks, DW.