1.8 Normative References, [RFC2616]

[Patrick Durusau <patrick@durusau.net>]

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Greetings!

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Under 2.3 Normative References, the citation for [RFC 2616] reads:

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[RFC2616] R. Fielding et al, “Hypertext Transfer Protcol – HTTP/1.1”,
IETF RFC 2616, June 1999. http://www.w3.org/Protocols/rfc2616/rfc2616.txt
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The canonical citation for RFC2616 given by
http://www.rfc-editor.org/in-notes/rfc-ref.txt, is:

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RFC2616 Fielding, R., Gettys, J., Mogul, J., Frystyk, H., Masinter,
L., Leach, P., and T. Berners-Lee, "Hypertext Transfer Protocol --
HTTP/1.1", RFC 2616, June 1999.
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Inclusion of the hyperlink is find but abbreviations are generally
avoided in formal writing and in standards.

Hope everyone is having a great week!

Patrick

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Patrick Durusau
patrick@durusau.net
Technical Advisory Board, OASIS (TAB)
Former Chair, V1 - US TAG to JTC 1/SC 34
Convener, JTC 1/SC 34/WG 3 (Topic Maps)
Editor, OpenDocument Format TC (OASIS), Project Editor ISO/IEC 26300
Co-Editor, ISO/IEC 13250-1, 13250-5 (Topic Maps)

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