4.3.1 General Attributes

[Patrick Durusau <patrick@durusau.net>]

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Greetings,

The text of 4.3.1 General Attributes reads:

*****
The following nodes may appear as elements of the Deployment Plan,
Artifact Specifications, or Service Specifications.
*****

Which is puzzling because 4.3 Deployment Plan Schema provides (last
sentence):

*****
Note the description of the structures and
information in this section utilizes YAML’s nomenclature.
*****

In addition to needing to be a note, there is a claim that YAML
nomenclature is being used.

I mention that because of:

"...may appear as elements of the..."

YAML does not use the term "elements."

If keeping the hanging paragraph for 4.3.1 General Attributes is
important, I would say:

*****
Deployment Plans, Artifact Specifications and Service Specifications
may contain the nodes defined in 4.3.1 General Attributes.
*****

Hope everyone is having a great day!

Patrick

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Patrick Durusau
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Convener, JTC 1/SC 34/WG 3 (Topic Maps)
Editor, OpenDocument Format TC (OASIS), Project Editor ISO/IEC 26300
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