Re: [camp-comment] 2.1 Application Assemblies - first paragraph

[GILBERT PILZ <gilbert.pilz@oracle.com>]

Patrick,

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~ gp

On 9/5/2013 8:37 AM, Patrick Durusau wrote:

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Greetings!

1) The first paragraph of 2.1 Application Assemblies starts with this
sentence:

*****
The model of resources manipulated through the interface, in
combination with the protocol used to remotely accomplish this,
constitutes the self-service PaaS management API.
*****

It isn't clear why a definition for self-service PaaS management API
appears under Application Assemblies.

But then the sentence isn't a model of clarity and may have some other
purpose.

2) The first paragraph of 2.1 Application Assemblies ends with this
sentence:

*****
The model contains resource types corresponding to the artifacts
discussed earlier.
*****

I am not sure what "model" is being referred to nor where "resource
types" have been discussed before. At least in this document.

Hope everyone is having a great day!

Patrick
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