Re: [camp-comment] 4 Platform Deployment Package

[GILBERT PILZ <gilbert.pilz@oracle.com>]

Patrick,

This comment has been captured as Jira issue CAMP-101 and will be processed by the TC. We will inform you when this issue has been resolved.

~ gp

On 9/5/2013 10:49 AM, Patrick Durusau wrote:

-----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE-----
Hash: SHA1

Greetings!

The paragraph immediately following 4 Platform Deployment Package
appears to be non-normative text.

As presented, it's not possible to mark that text as non-normative
while keeping the bulk of Section 4 as normative.

Suggestion: Create an "Introduction" section for each primary section
and declare "introductions" as non-normative for the entire
specification.

Creates the needed placeholder for non-normative introductions and is
better for making references that distinguish the text following a
section header from the rest of the section. (called a hanging paragraph)

Hope everyone is having a great day!

Patrick
- -- 
Patrick Durusau
patrick@durusau.net
Technical Advisory Board, OASIS (TAB)
Former Chair, V1 - US TAG to JTC 1/SC 34
Convener, JTC 1/SC 34/WG 3 (Topic Maps)
Editor, OpenDocument Format TC (OASIS), Project Editor ISO/IEC 26300
Co-Editor, ISO/IEC 13250-1, 13250-5 (Topic Maps)

Another Word For It (blog): http://tm.durusau.net
Homepage: http://www.durusau.net
Twitter: patrickDurusau
-----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE-----
Version: GnuPG v1.4.11 (GNU/Linux)
Comment: Using GnuPG with Thunderbird - http://www.enigmail.net/
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=JTN4
-----END PGP SIGNATURE-----

--
This publicly archived list offers a means to provide input to the
OASIS Cloud Application Management for Platforms (CAMP) TC.

In order to verify user consent to the Feedback License terms and
to minimize spam in the list archive, subscription is required
before posting.

Subscribe: camp-comment-subscribe@lists.oasis-open.org
Unsubscribe: camp-comment-unsubscribe@lists.oasis-open.org
List help: camp-comment-help@lists.oasis-open.org
List archive: http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/camp-comment/
Feedback License: http://www.oasis-open.org/who/ipr/feedback_license.pdf
List Guidelines: http://www.oasis-open.org/maillists/guidelines.php
Committee: http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/camp
Join OASIS: http://www.oasis-open.org/join/