Re: [camp-comment] "For example"

[GILBERT PILZ <gilbert.pilz@oracle.com>]

Patrick,

This comment has been captured as Jira issue CAMP-103 and will be processed by the TC. We will inform you when this issue has been resolved.

~ gp

On 9/5/2013 11:30 AM, Patrick Durusau wrote:

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Greetings!

Rather than comment on them separately, there are twenty-two (22)
instances of "For example" in the text.

Which is not distinguished from the surrounding normative text.

If these are truly examples, then they should be formatted as examples
and become non-normative texts.

If they are normative text, they should be made into normative
statements of fact.

Hope everyone is having a great day!

Patrick

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