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From: Martin P Pain [mailto:email@example.com]
Sent: 03 March 2014 10:37
Subject: [camp-comment] Response to call for comments: "application packag", "_uri", and "DP example"
1. In section 1.3 Example, it talks about "application package". Is this the same thing as a "Plan resource" (compare with section 2.3)?
2. Do the property names need "_uri" on the end? By putting that on, you prevent using the same property name in future for an inlined version of the linked resource (if a future spec version allows it, e.g. to allow the reduction of HTTP requests needed to get certain information/resources). A property named "operations" on an assembly resource (as indeed the arrow is labelled in the 2nd diagram in section 2.2.6) would have exactly the same semantics as a property named "operations_uri", when the value is a string containing a URI. The advantage of the former would be the possible widening of the allowed value type in future, as mentioned just now, where the value would be a JSON object rather than a string.
3. Example 5 (s22.214.171.124) still says "DP" while example 6 has changed this to "Plan"
Some spelling/grammar points which aren't part of changes from the previous comment period:
4. Section 2.7 Representation skew: "it exists but it an intermediate state" should be "it exists but in an intermediate state".
5. In various places the informal spelling "thru" is used. I would expect this to be "through".
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