[OASIS Issue Tracker] Created: (CAMP-118) 4.3.2.4 services - "application in"?

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4.3.2.4 services - "application in"?
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                 Key: CAMP-118
                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/CAMP-118
             Project: OASIS Cloud Application Management for Platforms (CAMP) TC
          Issue Type: Bug
          Components: Public Review
            Reporter: Gilbert Pilz


From the comment list: https://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/camp-comment/201309/msg00078.html 
TAB issue: https://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/TAB-93

4.3.2.4 currently reads: 

***** 
This node describes the services that the application in the PDP requires in order to function. 
***** 

"in the PDP" don't we mean "described in a PDP"? 

Suggest: 

***** 
The services node specifies the services required by an application described in a PDP. 
***** 

Removes the ambiguity of "in order to function." Don't know what "function" means and it could vary from application to application.

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