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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (CAMP-122) 4.3.4 ServiceSpecification - application contained within the PDP?
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Tom Rutt commented on CAMP-122:
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Triage Issue 122:
Seems like a reasonable editorial fix.
> 4.3.4 ServiceSpecification - application contained within the PDP?
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> Key: CAMP-122
> URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/CAMP-122
> Project: OASIS Cloud Application Management for Platforms (CAMP) TC
> Issue Type: Bug
> Components: Public Review
> Reporter: Gilbert Pilz
>
> From the comment list: https://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/camp-comment/201309/msg00078.html
> TAB issue: https://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/TAB-97
> 4.3.4 ServiceSpecification currently reads:
> *****
> A ServiceSpecification outlines a service that the application contained within the PDP requires in order to function. This outline is not intended to be a complete description of the service but, instead, delineate those characteristics that are significant to the application. This type has the following, general representation:
> *****
> outlines? I got the impression a ServiceSpecification is identifying a service? Yes?
> If that is correct, suggest:
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> A ServiceSpecification node describes a service used by an application identified in a PDP.
> Note: The description may not be complete but may contain only characteristics of significance to a particular application.
> *****
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