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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Updated: (CAMP-97) 2.1.4 Capabilities and Requirements and following


     [ http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/CAMP-97?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels:all-tabpanel ]

Adrian Otto updated CAMP-97:
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    Proposal: Close no action, addressed by resolution of CAMP-99

> 2.1.4 Capabilities and Requirements and following
> -------------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: CAMP-97
>                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/CAMP-97
>             Project: OASIS Cloud Application Management for Platforms (CAMP) TC
>          Issue Type: Bug
>          Components: Public Review
>            Reporter: Gilbert Pilz
>
> Patrick Durusau submitted the following PR comment (https://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/camp-comment/201309/msg00025.html):
> I have already comments on the UML diagrams in general and won't
> repeat those concerns here.
> The balance of section 2 reads as though it is a set of definitions,
> accompanied by diagrams to aid the reader in understanding
> relationships between the defined items.
> If that is the case and I don't know that it is, you make normative
> definitions with references to formal definitions, for all of the
> terms that appear in Section 2, in CAMP terminology.
> Then, in Section 2, as a non-normative section, could be replete with
> diagrams that illustrate the points currently being made by the text.
> That would avoid the need to resolve conflicts between UML and other
> provisions of normative text for CAMP.

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