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Subject: Re: [camp] Groups - CD04package.zip uploaded
I've updated the package. The filename is now "CSD04package.zip". Disposition of your issues inline ... On Feb 4, 2014, at 4:11 PM, Anish Karmarkar <Anish.Karmarkar@oracle.com> wrote: > Thanks for generating this. > > Here is my feedback (all minor): > > 1) It should be called CSD04 candidate/package. The diff file should be named ...csd03-csd04-diff. There is no such thing as CD anymore in OASIS. I've changed the file names to fix this. > 2) The diff document should be a PDF (at the very least). If you include other formats, that's fine. I've generated a PDF version of the diff document and included it along with a Word version. > 3) The figures in HTML are pretty bad. The text in the figures is hard to read. Is this fixable? Word generates crummy HTML. How much effort do we want to expend to compensate for this? We could, for example, hand-generate GIFs for each of our figures and UML diagrams, include those, then edit the base HTML file to link to them. We should discuss this tomorrow. > 4) The file extension for HTML should be .html, not .htm Fixed. > 5) The document camp-spec-v1.1-wd39.doc should be a clean doc not a diff from wd38. wd38, to those outside the TC, is irrelevant. Fixed. > 6) Since there is a link in the front page to the latest TA doc, the link to the TA doc on docs.oasis-open.org should be live before we start the PR. Jacques has promised to post the udpated TA doc before the call. If we can't do a PR of TA in conjunction with the main spec (because folks need time to review or the TA doc is not fit for PR), I suggest we create a CSD of the TA doc without a PR. A CSD will result in the link becoming live. We should discuss this on tomorrow's call. > > Thanks. > > -Anish > -- > > On 2/3/14 1:24 PM, Gilbert Pilz wrote: >> /Submitter's message/ >> Here is the CD04 candidate package. Please review this and get back to >> me ASAP with any issues. >> -- Mr. Gilbert Pilz >> *Document Name*: CD04package.zip >> <https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/camp/document.php?document_id=52114> >> ------------------------------------------------------------------------ >> *Description* >> Package of files that serve as a candidate for CD04 and eventual public >> review. The package contains: >> >> * CAMP SPEC PR01 Disposition of Comments.ods - disposition of comments >> spreadsheet in ODS format >> >> * CAMP SPEC PR01 Disposition of Comments.xlsx - disposition of comments >> spreadsheet in Excel format >> >> * camp-spec-v1.1-cd03-cd04-diff.doc - diff between CD03 and CD04 >> >> * camp-spec-v1.1-wd39.doc - Word source for CD04 >> >> * camp-spec-v1.1-wd39.htm - HTML version of CD04 >> >> * camp-spec-v1.1-wd39.pdf - PDF version of CD04 >> >> * camp-spec-v1.1-wd39_files/ - image files for HTML version of CD04 >> >> * camp-type-definitions.zip - type definition files for CAMP 1.1 >> Download Latest Revision >> <https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/camp/download.php/52114/latest/CD04package.zip> >> Public Download Link >> <https://www.oasis-open.org/committees/document.php?document_id=52114&wg_abbrev=camp> >> ------------------------------------------------------------------------ >> *Submitter*: Mr. Gilbert Pilz >> *Group*: OASIS Cloud Application Management for Platforms (CAMP) TC >> *Folder*: Working Drafts >> *Date submitted*: 2014-02-03 13:23:57 >> > > --------------------------------------------------------------------- > To unsubscribe from this mail list, you must leave the OASIS TC that generates this mail. Follow this link to all your TCs in OASIS at: > https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/portal/my_workgroups.php
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