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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] (CAMP-164) Response to call for comments: "application packag", "_uri", and "DP example"
[ https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/CAMP-164?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels:all-tabpanel ] Martin Chapman updated CAMP-164: --------------------------------- Resolution: Resolved in WD 40. From 12th March 2014: editorial fixes Motion: resolve CAMP-164 with the changes in the description; m: Gil, s: Jacques Motion Carries was:Resolved in WD 40. > Response to call for comments: "application packag", "_uri", and "DP example" > ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ > > Key: CAMP-164 > URL: https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/CAMP-164 > Project: OASIS Cloud Application Management for Platforms (CAMP) TC > Issue Type: Bug > Components: SPEC PR2 > Reporter: Martin Chapman > > https://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/camp-comment/201403/msg00000.html > 1. In section 1.3 Example, it talks about "application package". Is this the same thing as a "Plan resource" (compare with section 2.3)? > 3. Example 5 (s4.2.2.1) still says "DP" while example 6 has changed this to "Plan" > Some spelling/grammar points which aren't part of changes from the previous comment period: > 4. Section 2.7 Representation skew: "it exists but it an intermediate state" should be "it exists but in an intermediate state". > 5. In various places the informal spelling "thru" is used. I would expect this to be "through". -- This message was sent by Atlassian JIRA (v6.2.2#6258)
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