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Subject: More WebCGM editorial corrections

From: Lofton Henderson <lofton@rockynet.com>
To: David Cruikshank <David.Cruikshank@pss.boeing.com>
Date: Fri, 19 Jan 2001 16:01:31 -0700

Dave --

I'm sending these to you, as you are the document editor for WebCGM release 
2.  They are all trivial editorial.

3.2.1.1, item#7:  last word should be "navigate", not "negotiate".

3.2.1.3, 2nd pgh:  is the spelling "identifiing" correct?

3.2.2.3, 2nd pgh, 2nd sentence:  delete "the" from "is the a Behavior 
parameter".

3.2.2.3, 5th pgh:  insert a space in "3.1.1above".

3.2.2.7, 3rd pgh:  insert a space in "withobjects".

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-Lofton.