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Subject: Re: [cmis-comment] comments on CMIS v1.1 PR
Two comments on the 30-day Public Review for CMIS v1.1 [1]=========================================================Need a (Normative) Reference for "the Orderly language"=========================================================With respect to Section 6 Conformance (Browser Binding,"CMIS Orderly Schema") and the presentation of contentin Appendix B:----------------------------------------------------------------Appendix B. Schema Language (Orderly)We wish to thank Lloyd Hilaiel for his work in defining theOrderly language, and express our gratitude for allowingthe use of Orderly in this specification.... Orderly is anergonomic micro-language that can represent a subset ofJSONSchemaB.3 A Non-Normative TutorialB.4 The Normative GrammarOrderly_schema----------------------------------------------------------------It appears that the "CMIS Orderly Schema" (aka "Orderly_schema",presented in the independent file "cmis-browserbinding.orderly"(cited there as "Browser Binding Schema) is a "Normative Portion"in the Work Product. If so, the formal language used(called "the Orderly language") needs to have a (Normative) Referencein the Introductory content of the spec. In the review spec, there is noreference/citation for "the Orderly language" in Section 1.3 or 1.41.3 Non-Normative References1.2 Normative References=========================================================Identifiers for (Orderly) schema elements are broken=========================================================In Section 5.4 and perhaps other sections, the identifersfor the Orderly schema elements (using HTTP-scheme URIs)are mostly broken in that they contain one or two (maybemore) SPACE characters. The SPACE characters need to beremoved.Examples (33 examples, partial listing)5.4.1 Service URLSchema Element: http://docs.oasis-open.org/ns/ cmis/browser/201103/repositories5.4.2.1 Selector "repositoryInfo"Schema Element: http://docs.oasis-open.org/ns/ cmis/browser/201103/repositories5.4.2.2 Selector "typeChildren"Schema Element: http://docs.oasis-open.org/ns/ cmis/browser/201103/typeList5.4.2.3 Selector "typeDescendants"Schema Element: http://docs.oasis-open.org/ns/ cmis/browser/201103/typeContainer5.4.2.4 Selector "typeDefinition" [two SPACE characters]Schema Element: http: //docs.oasis-open.org/ns/cmis/ browser/201103/typeDefinitionType5.4.2.5 Selector "checkedOut"Schema Element: http://docs.oasis-open.org/ns/ cmis/browser/201103/objectList
5.4.2.6 Action "createDocument"Schema Element: http://docs.oasis-open.org/ns/ cmis/browser/201103/object5.4.2.7 Action "createDocumentFromSource"Schema Element: http://docs.oasis-open.org/ns/ cmis/browser/201103/object5.4.2.8 Action "createRelationship"Schema Element: http://docs.oasis-open.org/ns/ cmis/browser/201103/object5.4.2.9 Action "createPolicy"Schema Element: http://docs.oasis-open.org/ns/ cmis/browser/201103/object5.4.2.10 Action "createItem"Schema Element: http://docs.oasis-open.org/ns/ cmis/browser/201103/object5.4.2.11 Action "bulkUpdate" [two SPACE characters]Schema Element: <Array>http://docs.oasis-open. org/ns/cmis/browser/201103/ objectIdAndChangeToken5.4.2.12 Selector "query" [two SPACE characters]Schema Element: http: //docs.oasis-open.org/ns/cmis/ browser/201103/queryResultList5.4.2.13 Action "query" [two SPACE characters]Schema Element: http: //docs.oasis-open.org/ns/cmis/ browser/201103/queryResultList5.4.2.14 Selector "contentChanges"Schema Element: http://docs.oasis-open.org/ns/ cmis/browser/201103/objectList5.4.2.15 Action "createType" [two SPACE characters]Schema Element: http: //docs.oasis-open.org/ns/cmis/ browser/201103/typeDefinitionType
5.4.2.16 Action "updateType" [two SPACE characters]Schema Element: http: //docs.oasis-open.org/ns/cmis/ browser/201103/typeDefinitionType[5.4.2.17 Action "deleteType"Schema Element: /* none provided */ ]5.4.2.18 Selector "lastResult"Schema Element: http://docs.oasis-open.org/ns/ cmis/browser/201103/transaction5.4.3.1 Selector "children" [two SPACE characters]Schema Element: http: //docs.oasis-open.org/ns/cmis/ browser/201103/objectInFolderList5.4.3.2 Selector "descendants" [two SPACE characters]Schema Element: <Array>http: //docs.oasis-open.org/ns/cmis/ browser/201103/objectContainer5.4.3.3 Selector "folderTree" [two SPACE characters]Schema Element: <Array>http: //docs.oasis-open.org/ns/cmis/ browser/201103/objectContainer5.4.3.4 Selector "parent"Schema Element: http://docs.oasis-open.org/ns/ cmis/browser/201103/object5.4.3.5 Selector "parents" [two SPACE characters]Schema Element: <Array>http: //docs.oasis-open.org/ns/cmis/ browser/201103/objectParent5.4.3.6 Selector "checkedout"Schema Element: http://docs.oasis-open.org/ns/ cmis/browser/201103/objectList5.4.3.7 Action "createDocument"Schema Element: http://docs.oasis-open.org/ns/ cmis/browser/201103/object5.4.3.8 Action "createDocumentFromSource"Schema Element: http://docs.oasis-open.org/ns/ cmis/browser/201103/object5.4.3.9 Action "createFolder"Schema Element: http://docs.oasis-open.org/ns/ cmis/browser/201103/object5.4.3.10 Action "createPolicy"Schema Element: http://docs.oasis-open.org/ns/ cmis/browser/201103/object5.4.3.11 Action "createItem"Schema Element: http://docs.oasis-open.org/ns/ cmis/browser/201103/object5.4.3.12 Selector "allowableActions" [two SPACE characters]Schema Element: http: //docs.oasis-open.org/ns/cmis/ browser/201103/allowableActions5.4.3.13 Selector "object"Schema Element: http://docs.oasis-open.org/ns/ cmis/browser/201103/object5.4.3.14 Selector "properties"Schema Element: http://docs.oasis-open.org/ns/ cmis/browser/201103/properties*** Stopped checking/listing here; similar errors in sections 5.4.3.15 and following[1] 30-day Public Review for CMIS v1.1Content Management Interoperability Services (CMIS) Version 1.1Committee Speci?cation Draft 01 / Public Review Draft 0110 September 2012 and ends 10 October 2012--
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