Re: [cmis] [CMIS 1.1 Draft Review]

["Mueller, Florian" <florian.mueller02@sap.com>]

Hi David,

The exceptions in section 5.2.10 are listed in the same order as in sections 2.2.1.4.1 and 2.2.1.4.2.
Do you suggest to change these too?

Florian


From: David Choy <david.choy500@gmail.com<mailto:david.choy500@gmail.com>>
Date: Fri, 6 Jan 2012 19:40:39 +0100
To: "cmis@lists.oasis-open.org<mailto:cmis@lists.oasis-open.org>" <cmis@lists.oasis-open.org<mailto:cmis@lists.oasis-open.org>>
Subject: [cmis] [CMIS 1.1 Draft Review]

On V1.1 Draft 01b

[Clarifications]

p.7, 2.1.1.1
capabilityNewTypeSettableAttributes: Is this a comma-delimited list of attribute names?
capabilityCreatablePropertyTypes: Is this a comma-delimited list of data types?

p.9, 2.1.2, (4th bullet) A policy object represents ...
"controllablePolicy" should be "controllable"?

p.113, 2.2.1.2.7, optional input parameter orderBy:
Should state: ASC and DESC are optional, and the default is ASC

p.314, 5.3.1, 2nd paragraph, "described by the CMIS 1.1 specification"
(?)

[Typos]

p.308, 5.1, 2nd paragraph: ";" should be ","
p.309, 5.2.3, 1st sentence: "the the"
p.309, 5.2.4, column of CMIS types: change leading upper case to lower case

[Organization]

p.313, 5.2.10:
How about sorting the rows of CMIS Service Exceptions in alphabetical order?