[OASIS Issue Tracker] (CSAF-30) CSD01 WD01 Review comments from Beth Pumo

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Stefan Hagen created CSAF-30:
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             Summary: CSD01 WD01 Review comments from Beth Pumo
                 Key: CSAF-30
                 URL: https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/CSAF-30
             Project: OASIS Common Security Advisory Framework (CSAF) TC
          Issue Type: Improvement
         Environment: [Proposed]
            Reporter: Stefan Hagen
            Assignee: Stefan Hagen
            Priority: Minor


We received one TC internal comment with purely editorial content ("no technical corrections/comments") from Beth Pumo ( https://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/csaf/201707/msg00003.html ) that the editor intents to implement as non-material changes revision as candidate for balloting and further progression in the OASIS standards creation process. 

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We have no technical corrections/comments but we do have a few minor updates:

*    Typo on 2.2.3.7 – “The value Produzct Name of Branch Type indicates the name of the product.”

*    Syntax: The plural of Product ID is “Product IDs”, not the possessive form “Product ID’s” (2.2.4.n)

*    Syntax: Remove the “:” from the end of 2.2.5.4 Product Tree Model – Grouped:

*    Semantics: The non-normative comment for [CSAF-2.215-1] should read: “The -final- two **vulnerability involvement** status states, ….” Reason: since presumably Completed and Disputed are also a final status state based on the statement that open or in-progress documents should eventually be issued as Disputed or Completed. 

*   Syntax: The plural forms of OID and MIB are “OIDs” and “MIBs” respectively, not the possessive form “OID’s” and “MIB’s” (4.4 Document Publisher).

*    Formatting of indent for vuln:Notes on page 59

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