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Subject: Re: [cti] STIX 2.0-draft1


Appendix - Acronym Glossary

New comer, first time reader, would not be familiar with acronyms/abbreviations.
While so far, I've observed they are properly introduced in the text
at first time of appearance,
A dedicated section (at the end of the document) would be helpful.

e.g.:
CTI
TLO
SDO
...






On Fri, Jul 22, 2016 at 7:56 AM, Jerome Athias <athiasjerome@gmail.com> wrote:
> In Core Concepts, Version 2.0-draft-1
> 6.1. 6.1.Purpose
> should be
> 6.1. Purpose
>
>
>
> On Fri, Jul 22, 2016 at 7:50 AM, Jerome Athias <athiasjerome@gmail.com> wrote:
>> I suggest, as much as possible, when possible and appropriate, to use
>> directly the name of the Objects in the descriptions.
>> e.g.:
>>
>> An Attack Pattern is a mechanism for describing and documenting how an
>> attack against one or more targets may be executed.
>> would be
>> An Attack Pattern is a mechanism for describing and documenting how an
>> attack against one or more Victim Target(s) may be executed.
>>
>>
>> The idea is to favorite the reader in getting familiar with the
>> terminology/objects names asap, ideally after first read.
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> On Fri, Jul 22, 2016 at 7:45 AM, Jerome Athias <athiasjerome@gmail.com> wrote:
>>> Comments (by emails for now - sorry...) while reviewing...
>>>
>>> STIX 2.0 Specification
>>> Objects and Vocabularies, Version 2.0-draft-1
>>>
>>> 1. STIX Domain Objects
>>>
>>> Consider rephrasing:
>>>
>>> SDOs describe separate but related CTI data
>>> into
>>> SDOs describe separate, but related, CTI data
>>> -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
>>> and they are designed to allow producers flexibility in how SDOs are associated
>>> into
>>> and they are designed to provide flexibility to producers while
>>> describing how SDOs are associated
>>> -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
>>> This modularity allows a large number of scenarios to be described
>>> into
>>> This modularity allows for a large number of scenarios to be described
>>> -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
>>> which maximizes the usefulness of STIX in the CTI space.
>>> into
>>> which maximizes the efficiency of STIX in the CTI space, and ensure
>>> extensibility.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> On Tue, Jul 19, 2016 at 2:40 AM, Wunder, John A. <jwunder@mitre.org> wrote:
>>>> All,
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> After 6+ months of excellent work by the TC, the STIX editors feel that
>>>> we’re now at the point where the STIX 2.0 working documents are “complete”
>>>> and ready for a holistic review. There are still a couple TODOs and maybe
>>>> some rough edges but content-wise we’re basically there. We’ve tagged the
>>>> current version of these document versions “STIX 2.0 draft-1”: the first
>>>> draft for what will become STIX 2.0. Congratulations, everyone!
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> The release of this draft begins a two-week comment period: through July
>>>> 29th, we’re hoping/expecting that each of you can take the time to do an
>>>> in-depth review of the documents and provide your comments for discussion.
>>>> During this period the documents will remain in Google Docs and we’ll be
>>>> able to quickly iterate to incorporate changes and ensure that what comes
>>>> out is the best the TC has to offer. As usual, comments and suggestions
>>>> directly in Google Docs are the easiest for us to handle, but we’ve also
>>>> exported PDFs and Word documents (attached) if that’s easier for you.
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> I can’t stress this enough: now is the time to review these documents. For
>>>> these two weeks, while the documents are in Google Docs and we have a few
>>>> weeks left before August, we can still be relatively agile about making
>>>> changes. In the first week of August, when we move to the OASIS template,
>>>> we’ll lose much of that agility and have to become much more deliberate.
>>>> It’s not a bad thing, it’s a part of the process, and comments are of course
>>>> still greatly appreciated, but it does put more of a burden on your already
>>>> overworked editors to adjudicate them and keep the documents up to date.
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Please feel free to re-distribute these documents, but keep in mind it’s an
>>>> early draft and will likely change quite a bit. As usual, comments from
>>>> non-TC members are acceptable but must be made through official channels on
>>>> the cti-comment mailing list
>>>> (https://www.oasis-open.org/committees/comments/index.php?wg_abbrev=cti).
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Assuming we get a lot of comments and the documents improve this week we
>>>> expect to release draft-2 next Monday. Also, on the working call tomorrow
>>>> we’ll give you a bit of a tour of the documents and point out areas to focus
>>>> on. We’ve also started work on schemas and examples for this draft, which
>>>> should be available by the middle of this week.
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Thanks,
>>>>
>>>> John, Bret, and Aharon (your STIX Editors & Co-Chairs)
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> PS: We still have the final STIX 2.0 specification split in two to keep
>>>> Google Docs from exploding. The intent is that when we move to the OASIS
>>>> specification the documents will be combined into one.
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
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