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Subject: Re: Section on specialization in Committee Note Revision 19
Here are my recommended changes/suggestions for the Committee Note:
Abstract section:
Suggest changing the phrase that says LwDITA has "fewer features" to "a more restricted feature set" instead. (This mimics Stan's comment on this same section). Status section, 2nd para:
Final line is missing the URL for the DITA TC web page (which is: https://www.oasis-open.org/committees/tc_home.php?wg_abbrev=dita). 1.2 Terminology section:
The Markdown-specific term "ATX headers" is mentioned in this section, but it appears nowhere else in the document. Suggest it be dropped. 2 Why Lightweight DITA? Para 3:
"LwDITA can provide this mapping" -> "LwDITA provides this mapping" 3 What is Lightweight DITA? Para 3:
Typo: "individualsthat" -> "individuals that" 4.2 Elements in the LwDITA map:
Typo: "super script" -> "superscript" 4.5 New multimedia elements:
"Loop automatically seeks back the start of audio..." is awkward. Suggest: "Loop automatically returns to the start of audio..." 5.3.2 Examples of MDITA topics:
Minor error in code example: "! [Image](remote.png)" -> "![Image](remote.png)" (remove space between exclamation mark and following left square bracket). Cheers! -
Keith Schengili-Roberts
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From: dita-lightweight-dita@lists.oasis-open.org <dita-lightweight-dita@lists.oasis-open.org> on behalf of Tim Grantham <tim@precisioncontent.com>
Sent: September 18, 2017 10:31:28 AM To: dita-lightweight-dita@lists.oasis-open.org Subject: [dita-lightweight-dita] Section on specialization in Committee Note Revision 19 A couple of comments on this section:
I have reviewed the entire document and these are the only suggestions I have for changes. The Note looks very good.
Regards,
Tim.
Tim Grantham
Director of Publishing Solutions
Precision Content Authoring Solutions Inc.
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