Re: Review of Troubleshooting

[Bob Thomas <bob.thomas@tagsmiths.com>]

Thanks JoAnn. I have cut in all of your comments.

Best Regards,

Bob

On Mon, Oct 21, 2013 at 10:35 AM, JoAnn Hackos <joann.hackos@comtech-serv.com> wrote:

Bob et al.

Looks very good. However, can we really say it has no dependencies? Isn't it dependent on Michael Priestley's proposal for the steps domain.

Minor edits

Found one typo on page 16 of the PDF in the same. Find replaceing and change to replacing.

Page 17| extra comma before the word "condition" in troublebody

Page 18 no commas around "or clarify" in condition 

Sorry the clumsy.

Still working at home 

JoAnn

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