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Subject: Re: [dita] rubric for SC brainstorming


  I agree completely with you. Strike my suggestion, and count me as 
fully behind the original wording.
--
Don

On 10/20/2010 10:04 PM, Jang F.M. Graat wrote:
> Hello Don,
>
> Adding the word "necessarily" actually makes people feel it IS some 
> sort of guidance. Stating something is not a reliable guide does not 
> state is is NOT the direction DITA will be moving in, nor does it 
> state that it IS. It simply states that people should not build their 
> future on the info in the document, and that seems to be exactly what 
> we're trying to express in that particular disclaimer. So I would not 
> add "necessarily".
>
> Jang F.M. Graat
> Traveling philosopher
> http://www.jang.nl
>
> On 20 okt 2010, at 20:56, Don Day (LbW) wrote:
>
>> Jang, you have eloquently expressed the unease I felt about the 
>> course of the discussion. I like your minimalist approach--it says 
>> what it needs to say while leaving the responsibility for how the 
>> information is used up to the user without discouraging their 
>> interest in the potential of the exploratory work. I endorse this 
>> approach. I might suggest only the consideration of adding a word 
>> that adds a bit of length to the leash: "It is not *necessarily* a 
>> reliable guide..."
>> -- 
>> Don Day
>> Chair, OASIS DITA TC
>>
>>
>> On 10/20/2010 1:40 PM, Jang F.M. Graat wrote:
>>> Hello all,
>>>
>>> After listening / reading quietly for over a year, here's my first 2 
>>> cents, about the disclaimer discussion:
>>>
>>> Being a minimalist at heart, I would use fewer words and rephrase 
>>> the disclaimer as follows:
>>>
>>> "This document reflects exploratory work. It is not a reliable guide 
>>> on the future direction of DITA. It should not be taken as guidance 
>>> for using DITA or for developing DITA tools."
>>>
>>> The fact that it is work by a subcommittee is irrelevant, as 
>>> exploratory papers may also be produced by the TC as a whole, right 
>>> ? So leaving out the reference to the subcommittee makes the 
>>> statement useful for any exploratory document that might emerge out 
>>> of the DITA TC community. Also, the fact that it is not endorsed or 
>>> approved by the TC is irrelevant, as that is not the nature of 
>>> exploratory documents. They are meant to be input for discussions, 
>>> not proposals to be approved. Each document will have some reference 
>>> to the authorship, which may be an individual TC or SC member or an 
>>> SC or even the TC as a whole. It can still be exploratory, and 
>>> should not be taken as definitive. That is all we're trying to 
>>> state. So leave out all the redundant and irrelevant information.
>>>
>>> Jang F.M. Graat
>>> Travelling philosopher
>>> www.jang.nl
>>>
>>>
>>> On 20 okt 2010, at 18:23, Bruce Nevin (bnevin) wrote:
>>>
>>>> Re the added phrase:
>>>>
>>>>> and is not endorsed by the DITA Technical Committee as a whole
>>>>
>>>> We don't want it to sound like the TC disapproves of this work (or 
>>>> even
>>>> of SC work in general). How about something like "has not yet been 
>>>> taken
>>>> up as work of the Technical Committee as a whole"? That might look 
>>>> like
>>>> this:
>>>>
>>>> "Because this document reflects exploratory work by a subcommittee
>>>> of the DITA Technical Committee, which has not yet been taken up
>>>> as work of the Technical Committee as a whole, it is not a reliable
>>>> guide as to the future direction of DITA, and should not be taken
>>>> as guidance for using DITA or for developing DITA tools."
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> ________________________________
>>>>
>>>>    From: Michael Priestley [mailto:mpriestl@ca.ibm.com]
>>>>    Sent: Wednesday, October 20, 2010 10:01 AM
>>>>    To: Su-Laine Yeo
>>>>    Cc: dita@lists.oasis-open.org
>>>>    Subject: RE: [dita] rubric for SC brainstorming
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>    Sounds good to me. I'll add a quick thought for Michael B's
>>>> question:
>>>>
>>>> >                 - refrain from presenting subcommittee work as
>>>> an official OASIS
>>>> >TC position in a public forum (webinar, conference, white
>>>> paper, etc)
>>>> >
>>>> >I still need clarification on the second issue, as my
>>>> understanding may
>>>> >allow more exposure of the subcommittee work than the TC would
>>>> like.
>>>>
>>>>    I think the key phrase there is "as an official TC position". If
>>>> it's presented as exploratory work to solicit feedback, I personally
>>>> don't see any problem with that. But if it's presented as established
>>>> strategy or direction, that would be dangerously misleading.
>>>>
>>>>    Michael Priestley, Senior Technical Staff Member (STSM)
>>>>    Lead IBM DITA Architect
>>>>    mpriestl@ca.ibm.com
>>>>    http://dita.xml.org/blog/25 <http://dita.xml.org/blog/25>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>    From:     "Su-Laine Yeo" <su-laine.yeo@justsystems.com>
>>>>    To: <dita@lists.oasis-open.org>
>>>>    Date:     10/19/2010 05:46 PM
>>>>    Subject:     RE: [dita] rubric for SC brainstorming
>>>>
>>>> ________________________________
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>    Hi everyone,
>>>>
>>>>    Longer-term, I think we should move in the direction of having
>>>> variety
>>>>    of standardized messages to display on documents to indicate
>>>> their level
>>>>    of official-ness and final-ness, and put a message on every
>>>> single
>>>>    document and web page that we make visible to the public. I'm
>>>> more
>>>>    concerned about the public finding the TC's outdated versions of
>>>>    technical proposals for DITA features than about the public
>>>> reading SC
>>>>    documents. Also, a lot of publicly-available content on OASIS's
>>>> websites
>>>>    is simply the ideas of one or more individual TC members and
>>>> isn't even
>>>>    approved by a subcommittee, and that stuff needs disclaimers
>>>> most of
>>>>    all. But all that will require more mulling-over for a later
>>>> time. End
>>>>    of rant for now ;)
>>>>
>>>>    For our immediate needs, I think the gist of Bruce's suggestion
>>>> is good,
>>>>    and suggest the following rewordings for clarity:
>>>>
>>>>    "This document reflects exploratory work by a subcommittee of
>>>> the DITA
>>>>    Technical Committee and is not endorsed by the DITA Technical
>>>> Committee
>>>>    as a whole. It is not a reliable guide as to the future
>>>> direction of
>>>>    DITA, and should not be taken as guidance for using DITA or for
>>>>    developing DITA tools."
>>>>
>>>>    W.r.t. Michael's request for guidance on the second issue he
>>>> described,
>>>>    I don't have any thoughts at this time, although I appreciate
>>>> the
>>>>    question.
>>>>
>>>>    Cheers,
>>>>    Su-Laine
>>>>
>>>>    Su-Laine Yeo
>>>>    Solutions Consultant
>>>>    JustSystems Canada, Inc.
>>>>    Office: 778-327-6356
>>>>    syeo@justsystems.com
>>>>
>>>>    XMetaL Community Forums: http://forums.xmetal.com
>>>> <http://forums.xmetal.com/>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>    -----Original Message-----
>>>>    From: Michael Boses [mailto:mboses@QUARK.com
>>>> <mailto:mboses@QUARK.com> ]
>>>>    Sent: Wednesday, October 13, 2010 8:33 AM
>>>>    To: Doug Morrison; dita@lists.oasis-open.org
>>>>    Subject: RE: [dita] rubric for SC brainstorming
>>>>
>>>>    Doug, I see the point that many entities outside of the DITA TC
>>>> provide
>>>>    guidance. I think the issue here is clarification that
>>>> subcommittees do
>>>>    not issue guidance. Official OASIS Guidance, when it originates
>>>> in a
>>>>    subcommittee, is the result of subcommittee deliverables being
>>>> vetted
>>>>    and incorporated into guidance by the parent committee.
>>>>
>>>>    At least this is how I understand it as someone trying to follow
>>>> the
>>>>    rules as a subcommittee co-chair. There are two things we have
>>>> been
>>>>    asked to do:
>>>>
>>>>                    - place a caveat on our posts indicating their
>>>> status as not
>>>>    approved for implementation (It looks like Bruce's wording
>>>> achieves
>>>>    that).
>>>>
>>>>                    - refrain from presenting subcommittee work as
>>>> an official OASIS
>>>>    TC position in a public forum (webinar, conference, white paper,
>>>> etc)
>>>>
>>>>    I still need clarification on the second issue, as my
>>>> understanding may
>>>>    allow more exposure of the subcommittee work than the TC would
>>>> like.
>>>>    Presenting some of the ideas of our subcommittee is the best way
>>>> to vet
>>>>    them with the actual stakeholders in external organizations. We
>>>>    certainly can pass on that opportunity, but I need to make sure
>>>> that is
>>>>    the TC's intention. It may be that any public presentations we
>>>> make will
>>>>    need to include a disclaimer similar to the one we will place on
>>>> posts.
>>>>
>>>>    Perhaps, Don, Michael, or others on the TC can clarify if and
>>>> how we
>>>>    handle informing the public on progress and obtaining feedback.
>>>>
>>>>    Regards,
>>>>
>>>>    Michael Boses
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>    -----Original Message-----
>>>>    From: Doug Morrison [mailto:dmorrison@dita4all.com
>>>> <mailto:dmorrison@dita4all.com> ]
>>>>    Sent: Wednesday, October 13, 2010 11:07 AM
>>>>    To: dita@lists.oasis-open.org
>>>>    Subject: Re: [dita] rubric for SC brainstorming
>>>>
>>>>     I think the final sentence "Such guidance is exclusively in the
>>>>
>>>>    purview of the DITA Technical Committee" should be dropped -
>>>> because it
>>>>    is not true as it stands, and not necessary.
>>>>
>>>>    Regards,
>>>>
>>>>    Doug Morrison
>>>>    Information Architect
>>>>    http://dita4all.com <http://dita4all.com/>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>    On 13/10/2010 15:33, Bruce Nevin (bnevin) wrote:
>>>> > In yesterday's call, we talked about subcommittees needing
>>>> some kind
>>>>    of
>>>> > cover for creative discussion and brainstorming so that
>>>> outside
>>>>    readers
>>>> > of the discussion won't take it as guidance from the TC. The
>>>> relevant
>>>> > bit from the minutes (as amended to include Seth's name):
>>>> >
>>>> >> Seth Park: For DITA and composite environments, we came up
>>>> with
>>>> >> a feature request that was technically not implementable.
>>>> >> Is there a `code word' under which to talk in papers and
>>>> >> not shut down creativity.
>>>> >> MB: A standard disclaimer would be wonderful.
>>>> >> Don, MP: Let's pursue that on the alias.
>>>> > I imagine two aspects of a disclaimer, its content and its
>>>> location.
>>>> >
>>>> > For example, on the title page or in a footnote on the title
>>>> or in a
>>>> > note paragraph placed prominently on the first page (to be
>>>> decided), a
>>>> > subcommittee document might say something like:
>>>> >
>>>> > This paper reflects exploratory work by a subcommittee of the
>>>> DITA
>>>> > Technical Committee. It is not a reliable guide as to the
>>>> future
>>>> > direction of DITA, and should not be taken as guidance for
>>>>    implementing
>>>> > or using DITA. Such guidance is exclusively in the purview of
>>>> the DITA
>>>> > Technical Committee.
>>>> >
>>>> > Let the discussion begin!
>>>> >
>>>> >                  /B
>>>> >
>>>> >
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