RE: [dss-x] Comments to ebxml profile.

["Pim van der Eijk" <pvde@sonnenglanz.net>]

Hello Juan Carlos,

Thank you, these are excellent comments.  I've updated the document
accordingly and uploaded it to:
http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/dss-x/document.php?document_id=
27237

Kind regards,

Pim 

-----Original Message-----
From: Juan Carlos Cruellas [mailto:cruellas@ac.upc.edu] 
Sent: 04 February 2008 16:50
To: dss-x
Subject: [dss-x] Comments to ebxml profile.

Pim,

Just some comments on your document on ebxml profile.

Section 2.1.

Current text in first bullet: "A signature message exchange"
Proposed text: "A signature generation message exchange" to stress that the
exchange of messages is for generating a signature

Section 2.1.1:

You mention several XML elements. Could it be possible to include the
prefixes you anticipated in section 1.4? They belong to different namespaces
and this may help readers.

Lines 95 to 99. When @RequestId is present with value and the
<eb..:MessageId> has a value, should this vallue be equal to the value in
the @RequestId? Maybe something could be said on this issue, even if they
may be different...

Section 2.3 is hard to follow, as I am not very experienced in ebXML.... 
apart from that, do you think that having one section for Versio 2.0 and
another one for Version 3.0 could improve readability?


Regards

Juan Carlos.

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